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Zomior15dCommentedThe Striker was a marvel of engineering, a sleek, crescent-shaped raft designed to harness the power of the Mera Mera no Mi. Its hull gleamed in the sunlight, the intricate designs etched into its surface speaking of a mastery of the sea and the craft of shipbuilding. Noct ran his hand along the smooth wood, marveling at the way it seemed to pulse with a life of its own.- Zomior20dPosted
Just putting this review because I saw alot of bad reviews, Just read the first 16 chapters and didn't see any problems with the writing or spacing so I believe the author fixed any problems. I haven't read the original story so not sure how much AU content there is yet but im really enjoying what ive read so far and have even laughed out loud twice while reading! Great job author looking forwards to continue reading and screw those guys who say otherwise.
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Not sure if its just me but i really hate how you went about "revealing" his fruit. I didnt expect that he would actually be hiding it or anything but he gets sneak attacked and spied on and the only thing he did was get mad for a couple minutes and then just forgives EVERYTHING because oh I had a good fight and Borsalino is just sooo lazy he has no bad intentions.
Ch 8 G-1 Marine Base - Zomior1mthCommentedWith his silver hair framing his face and his piercing yellow eyes, one could almost envision the dashing young man he would become in years to come. His cherubic countenance hinted at a future of charisma and allure.
- Zomior1mthCommentedI saw that the person in the mirror had not changed much except for the big, slightly sinister eyes. The originally fat and ugly face had become thinner, and the skin was close to a thin layer of facial muscles.
- Zomior2mthCommented[Jagan Eye: Able to use telekinesis for 1 minute a day to lift things] (Sauce: Yu Yu Hakusho)
- Zomior3mthReplied to EtherealStarAs everyone knew, the hand seals for Chidori and Raikiri were 'Ox-Rabbit-Monkey,' a three-step sequence.
- Zomior3mthCommentedAfter the prefect answered the riddle, we entered a large circular room with blue and silver silk hanging from the ceiling. Arch windows decorated the wall and a blue carpet with stars was placed in the center of the room.
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iwa not suna
This paragraph has been deleted. - Zomior3mthReplied to Phoniex158He had always admired Dumbledore and the magical world of Hogwarts, but now, he was confronted with a darker reality.
- Zomior3mthCommentedCh 59 Chapter 59 "New Enemy"
- Zomior3mthReplied to Kanishka_RajivAfter all, although this woman named Aya Uchiha was a bit flat at the airport, she was still very attractive.
- Zomior3mthCommentedKazuhiko looked at the hot spring and recalled a certain Hyuga's embarrassing moment. Glancing at Tsunade, he thought, "Well, Tsunade can probably do that too."
- Zomior4mthCommentedYes, this girl is the Two-Tails Jinchuriki of the Hidden Cloud Village, Yugito Nii. Although the village values martial prowess, it doesn't mean they are free from biases against Jinchuriki.
- Zomior4mthCommented[Insert Image of Rancor Here]
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3. A self-insert into Galen Mark. Also known as Starkiller