Review Detail of Zomior in Second Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)

Just putting this review because I saw alot of bad reviews, Just read the first 16 chapters and didn't see any problems with the writing or spacing so I believe the author fixed any problems. I haven't read the original story so not sure how much AU content there is yet but im really enjoying what ive read so far and have even laughed out loud twice while reading! Great job author looking forwards to continue reading and screw those guys who say otherwise.