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I don't think so, pretty sure he was set on the Emperor path. the reason it was mentioned was probably just to explain how a Quasi-Emperor can ascend.
who was this again? a high ranking thalmor or a relative to the one captured?
futa?
I can definitely believe that this is the entirety of his speech.
*starting mechanism and *within
should have a comma after "bridge" and "cutting" should be changed to "cut"
also, is there "a total of 8 Shinobi" or "around 8 Shinobi."? you could also change it to "A total of around 8 Shinobi" which would be grammatically correct, but it would be odd to use it in this context.
*tree branch
should either be "A large crowd was gathering at the green entrance gate of the village" or just remove the word "quite".
the 15 to 80km is the distance to sense flying thunder god marks. the 4.5 to 12km is his Space-time sensing field he can use to find the presence of Chakra signatures but not any details like strength or identity. the 3.5km is his Chakra field sensing which can detect strength, identity, etc
*subdao even the heavens are getting involved in the Sun vs Dub war.
who is this?
it just ate a bit too much mexican food when it saw the golden age ending.
I'm waiting for the two of them to just be locked in a room together to finally get over all the URT. Or maybe a tomb or cave, anything works.
how does the MC's system actually work again? is it mainly just a visual measurement of his skills as well as the occasional perk or ability he gets by completing certain tasks?