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Jeronimo

Jeronimo

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2017-07-12 JoinedUnited States
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo16h
    Replied to Gigafire

    maybe he wouldn't need it to be super powerful if it's only letting a few select people remember him - his sister and the OG cohort.

    "Really? Well… I might indeed commission a custom Memory from you, then…"
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo4d
    Commented

    😭😭😭😭😭😭

    "It's that the missing pieces form a person. Someone who was there, with us, in the Tomb of Ariel… and maybe even earlier than that. A man who has been cut from the world, as if he had never existed. Someone who was… precious to us. To me."
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo4d
    Commented

    That is absolutely an incredibly ingenious plot line!

    "Master Sunless… how would you react if I told you that there is a man-shaped hole in the world?" 
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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo6d
    Commented

    this is a gacha game bruh

    'A young man with a skinny physique...he is definitely no warrior,' Michael figured, while giving him a slight nod. His attention had never completely drifted from the Summoning Gate, so he smiled when two additional stars began to shine brightly, indicating the birth of a 3-Star Summon.
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo9d
    Commented

    Hi! I'm looking forward to how the story unfolds. Thanks for the chapter author 😀.

    Ch 229 The Conviction Of A Nimrod Worm [Part 2]
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo11d
    Commented

    when she's around he slips up more in general - she probably has some sort of charm talent or attribute or maybe innate ability

    It was strange, very strange.
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo12d
    Replied to Jeronimo

    just finished reading chapter 103 and I must say at this point the writing has improved quite nicely - still rough around the edges but I'm enjoying the read now.

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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo12d
    Commented

    bruh at this point I'm only continuing this novel to see if it actually gets better or if it stays the same 😮‍💨

    Talent Fragments: [978/1000]
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo16d
    Commented

    I know the comments are basically 2 years old but I get the feeling they don't really understand the sentiment behind this statement - its basically saying that you are doing yourself a disservice by giving up on yourself and not doing everything you possibly can to become stronger - and stronger is more of a blanket term (wealthier, healthier, physically stronger, mentally stronger). A comment mentioned the homeless so in this case it means if you just submit to the reality of being homeless and no longer try to better your own situation then that's a sin to yourself.

    'The biggest sin of the weak was allowing themselves to stay weak.'
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    Hero of Darkness
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo18d
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    It has a decent start. A glaring problem that gets more and more apparent is repetitive sentences and an incredibly generous use of adjectives. Characters aren't really fleshed out - it doesn't feel like I'm riding alongside MC on his journey (I can't get absorbed into the writing/story). While the power levels have been mapped out, the levels that we have been in contact with up to where I have read have not really been given a proper frame of reference. It's hard to get the feeling for how powerful someone or something really is. It indeed has potential, but reading it can be very jarring for me and it's hard to really sink myself into the story.

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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo18d
    Commented

    Not really big fan of the exaggerated use of adjectives. Alot of them feel forced and my tin foil hat says they're there for increased word count 🤔.

    Ch 35 Escape Plan [part 2]
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo19d
    Commented

    why have you done this! 😭 this cliffhanger...

    Ch 1606 Belated Apology
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo1mth
    Commented

    hmmm maybe those journals were indeed a way for her to pass information onto the next cycle and perhaps they have all been trapped in those cycles for decades or even longer and only Cassie has been somewhat aware of it the whole time because of the journals?

    And that was without even counting the unknown number of cycles the seven of them had lived through before arriving at this one… hopefully, the last. 
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo3mth
    Commented

    I regret binging this and running out of chapters. Now I have to wait just like everyone else 😭. If only I had found this novel a few months later I would've had alot more chapters to binge 😮‍💨

    "But why are you asking? And why… are you here again?"
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo3mth
    Commented

    now that I think about it, nightmare gates probably look like oblivion gates from Oblivion at least in my head, that makes them easier to picture for me

    The rift dwarfed the entire battlefield, stretching for hundreds and hundreds of meters into the shattered sky. The abandoned outpost, and the black fissure of the Nightmare Gate that led to the vicinity of the Black Skull, looked tiny and insignificant in front of it. 
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo3mth
    Commented

    I get an image of we are billions

    Sunny was sitting on the battlement of the defensive wall, looking at the apocalyptic sight of a giant horde of Nightmare Creatures advancing on the city. There were so many of them that it seemed as though the ground itself was moving, flowing forward as it seethed and churned.
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo3mth
    Replied to Hulyo_july

    I'm thinking something along those same lines, I can't wrap my head around the thought completely but this could have so many implications

    Now that Sunny knew that a First Nightmare was born of a tiny Seed, as well, he couldn't help but feel that it could only be planted into fertile soil. Wouldn't a soul that was full of fear and despair be more fertile, while one illuminated by hope less so?
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo3mth
    Commented

    I wonder if having the serpent in her shadow would make her more susceptible to awakening a shadow aspect or if it was potentially genetic and she will have the lineage of the shadow God too

    As it turned out, shadow essence did not react to Luster's presence at all… which was a big disappointment, considering that Sunny had stripped himself of Serpent's support in order to protect Rain.
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo3mth
    Commented

    the war maiden 100% has got to be effie

    Give the glass knife to the War Maiden in the Temple of the Chalice — that was what the immortal Shadow had told the original owner of the four-armed demon's body. And that was the secret Noctis wanted to learn from Sunny, while Sunny wanted to find his friends. So many coincidences...
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  • Jeronimo
    Jeronimo3mth
    Commented

    okay so this is out of nowhere but... if the wooden knife was destroyed when it's respective immortal was killed... doesn't that mean that the immortal for the obsidian knife and the one mordret might have is still alive? and presumably the obsidian knife is for noctis right?

    Noctis gave him a funny look, then cleared his throat and pointed to a chair that had a black kimono hanging on its backrest. The garment was made out of silk, intricately stitched, and fit his towering figure perfectly. It even had four sleeves instead of two, revealing that someone must have sewn the thing specifically for him.
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