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nope dont go there 1. its a hentai2. too many women already in his harem you want to add taimanin literally 9/10 is a women 3.also what are you gonna give them supernatural power someone have to increase the ceiling level power of human to goku using Kamehameha blowing planet
welcome back brother don't worry we re here for you you are never alone . as a new Muslim take it step by step don't need to rush just make sure that you stop doing bad deeds before you revert or slowly left them behind you don't let other Muslim(Haram police) judge and condemn affect you this is your journey not theirs just between you and Allah swt
i agree what kind of story if there are no lost in life it will just be another generic OP character story killing others iits good decision to shape his character through grief and pain such as life give this story some sense of realism in it make us reader felt the tension the pain and the sacrifice.
what inlike about this story is the emotional damage you put on mc and thats what reader love about your story it feels like we re more close to the mc we can feel the pain the desperation of the mc from the style of your writing but like many others i think you need to balance it allison and lydia is already a big baggage for mc adding and pulling another one on top of it is too much for the mc just let it cool down first.
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pls dont say u have a bf