Any author can make the humans be more op than the aliens, it's literally the power of writing 😂 I can even make a power up that logically fits in the Naruto world that is stronger than aliens. Almost every power in Naruto can be magnified to greater heights IF the author writes it properly 🤦‍♂️

it's not a nerf because aliens are powerful since the writers make them that way but if the writers wanted to logically make the humans stronger and develop it that way, then they can. Humans have chakra now all the author has to do is make the skills more op and more complicated if he wanted to.

Hiruzen is of the sarutobi clan, a clan that's always been powerful in their own right especially Hiruzens dad. Yamato had to get injected and was lucky. Guy was through pure hardwork and special technique that we see anyone can do if they put themselves thru hell which we see 3-4 generations already. Jiraiya, Minato and orochimaru is another stretch, as their talents lay more in their mind and ability to comprehend and learn things , nothing senju related plus theyre more likely have a civilian background Hatake clan again they are just another talented clan. You're just now trying to claim everyone is from the senju or mixed in with them lol Considering the conflict and the warring states made many clans fight and hate eachother, you wouldn't see much cross breeding. possible but unlikely and it's even more unlikely every genius is a senju lol That's just a senju fanboys wish at most. The leaf being a land with the best environment to grow in and having the best training and teaching methods is what fostered many of these talents. Just like every other village has their own genius talents , are you gonna claim they have senju DNA too? lol We see in the ninja world that there are many talented individuals all over the world, if it's possible for talents to pop up in random places without sharing sharing the same DNA then why wouldn't that be the case with the leaf too? lol they have the best land and many civilians and ninjaa flock to the leaf for a new life and this bringing in more potentially talented seedlings. The everyone is a senju theory has always been one of the dumbest take and the biggest cop out🤦‍♂️

but the theory doesn't hold up since a lot of these geniuses were born within the clan and their heritage can be easily traced plus they would then be subject to experiments and would have senju like physiques which we see they don't . Way too many holes in this theory tbh

Before aliens were a thing, the lore was already pretty good and op. They only added the alien twist at the end, and just used aliens to explain everything. But before that the lore was chakra/Entergy existed in the air and was all around them, then 1 day someone discovered and created the ability to harness the energy, then created a way to use this energy into techniques etc. Explaining why chakra and jutsu exists is easy. No one had any issue with the origins of it before the alien reveal so it really ain't a big deal or a nerf

highly disagree that Tobirama and Hashirama would be ok with it. Their clan was a big part of the order and balance, it was their clan who kept many in line. If they disappeared but every other clan and faction with a history of greed and violence were still around, then they 100% wouldn't be cool with it. Also the clan died and their was no major contribution to the village, they simply died off one slowly while every other clan thrived. Marrying outside the clan is fine, its happened before but for them to almost have new identities and have no connection to the clan? no lol. That would mean senju had almost all females after a certain point 😂, and why would any male senju give up his clan name and resources ? why would the clan willingly let themselves disappear and have no one in the clan to fight and protect the village and next generation ? The most logical theory is they were killed off slowly or in a big event. Tsunade being the only member left is literally nuts considering how many Senju males were around during the 1&2 era. After Tobirama dies it seems all the male kinsman died off except her brother at that time. From one of the biggest and strongest to only 2 members in 25yrs

It's the 1 millionth Alice pairing again, shocker. Anyways , MC was written pretty well, story had cool start with the samurais etc, update stability is currently dead tho. it's aight to kill an hour or 2

problem with this is the mate thing. As soon as you suggested the Alice mate angle, you took away any options. Now everyone knows Paul only has physical relationships and normal adult ones but will be forced to be with Alice cause of the mate angle. You ended any other outcome by doing this . If you were smarter, you'd have make it so no women has any mate plot with the mc and just let the mc wing it and explore his options 🤦‍♂️

if they wanted to explain why the mc is the way he is, then the author went about this wrong, instead it looks very forced. The Parents and sister may not have been around often but they had work/missions and since the MC is an adult, he shouldn't be traumatized or feel neglected instead he should feel happy. 1. He gets provided good food shelter, money, resources and a lit bit of a strong backing. 2. He has freedom to grow without family in the way or catching on that he's different. If the MC was an actual kid I'd maybe understand it but the MC is an adult, he wouldn't think "they don't love me" instead he would think "they're working a dangerous job that doesn't allow family time, they're doing the best to meet him whenever, they may not be here but they're supporting him financially and if he gets into trouble , they would help out". The MC chose to be cold to them instead of being an adult and understanding the situation

Interesting start and the way other characters interact with this new Naruto is pretty wholesome to see BUT it's another Hinata pairing that magically happens just cause

okay so another Hinata pairing 🤦‍♂️

dude same, a lot of twilight fics are all unfinished and barely get passed the first movie lol.

and too many Alice ones too. just went thru 10 after randomly picking twilight fics to read lol. Rosalie and Alice are overused

hoping Sasuke doesn't try to leave. Many fanfics have Sasuke realize and respect Naruto after Naruto powered up but yet they still have Sasuke leave just to continue the plot. This Sasuke seems more mature and even though he wants revenge, he doesn't seem to be obsessed to the point he'll do dumb stuff.

Warning it's another Alice pairing with a supposedly mature mc who once again is forced to be smitten cause some destiny mate bs.

Quick warning. Harem Harem Harem. had a lot of potential, mc felt like an actual person living in twilight instead of just being in twilight, the relationships the mc formed feels natural and very real, his persona and reputation is also very well written, he's made to be a sort of an outsider but he's no cut off, still easily a very social person who anyone can vibe with. You didn't feel too much outside influence in the story or anything cringe which youd' expect from most movie fanfics especially twilight. Had it as a very good read. Then Haram was introduced and rip.

basically killing the story since you have 1 love story that was written extremely well, paced properly and handled in a way not to be cringed or forced then you have another love interest who is only there cause of a bond and nothing more, then her character is pretty dull as she has no personalities and the mc doesn't even like her but he'll magically like her cause why not.... 😂 Went from Top tier to cliche and just another fanfic among many🤦‍♂️✌️

so your feelings got hurt over your ship👌

sounds like you a fanboy. The FF writers still write Naruto and Hinata as love at first sight or "fated" love bs. The original was bad and authors spamming the same ship with the same setup no matter how lacking the chemistry and how forced it feels , will not make it an enjoyable read for non fanboys who don't mind bad writing 🤦‍♂️

thanks for killing your own ff.