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obviously there's no proofreader for this work....
The plot of the story is great. However, sometimes it gets confusing due to inconsistency of the names for the characters, kingdoms, troops, etc. etc. Also, there are a lot of redundancy in sentences in each chapter which hampers and reduce the enjoyment of reading the story. It would be nice if author can have the chapters proofread before uploading it.