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Melayu

Melayu

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  • Melayu
    Melayu7mth
    Replied to DaoistkSpec02

    obviously there's no proofreader for this work....

    When Zhao Hai saw that Ge Lin had arrived, he immediately went up to him and said,"Grandpa Grimm, have we arrived?" They were now waiting for the magidle Chamber of Commerce to deliver the rabbits that green had bought, which was why Zhao Hai asked.
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    Living In Another World With A Farm
    Eastern · Ming Yu
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    I'd say that the novel concept is interesting but after enduring 18 chapters, i find the mc development is too fast. the storyline is sketchy and not developed well. certain plot advancement are missing making it confusing to the readers.

    Ch 18 A Huge Harvest
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    Xianxia: Started With 9999 Luck Value
    Eastern · Zhang Qing Tian Xia
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    MC's personality was changed too. He did not care if his actions killed so many innocents.

    Ch 263 Chaos Fire Body
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    author totally butchered the plot from chapter 229.....

    Ch 260 Primal Chaos Fire Spirit Pearl
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    did author changed the plot? 1st Mo Ling was erased, then Manman changed to a young woman and also seems to have been with MC for quite a long time from her monologue.

    Ch 250 Half-step Emperor. Shi Shan Was Furious
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    what happened to Mo Ling?

    Ch 246 Li Feng’s Hatred
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Replied to Melayu

    sorry I should say coins instead of SP

    Ch 16 Tidying Up the Harvest, News of the Three Disciples
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    good thing that these earlier chapters are still free to read with all the repetitions. If these cost us SP, it will be very annoying. author please take note

    Ch 16 Tidying Up the Harvest, News of the Three Disciples
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    Chapters 8, 9, 10 & 11 have conflicted plot for the 2nd disciple recruitment. Author please clean up the plot and delete the unnecessary chapters.

    Ch 11 The Fight for the first seat
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    Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!
    Eastern · Baby Rush
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    Since MC knows light heal magic, why doesn't he use it to heal his arm?

    Ch 38 Start of Class 1
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    The top of the mountain is called a summit. Submit means to surrender.

    Ch 1 Checked In For 10 years! How Many Hidden Old Demons Are There In This World?
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    Xianxia: My Junior Sisters Are Freaks!
    Eastern · You You Jiang Jiang!
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    Even if Otis have an average height for 19 years old, of course he'll be very tall compared to MC who's a midget that's 1 meter tall.

    Ch 14 Luxurious Accommodations
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    World Magic: I Awakened Light and Dark Magic Attributes
    Fantasy · Truly Miserable
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    Hughes is one meter tall!!! MC is a midget!!!

    Ch 13 Lach Academy of Magic
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    World Magic: I Awakened Light and Dark Magic Attributes
    Fantasy · Truly Miserable
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    Hmmm, is Zhang Hui a he or a she? Make up your mind author....

    Ch 80 Your Equipment Is Good
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    I Really Am Not The Lord of Demon
    Urban · Blind Leek
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Posted

    The plot of the story is great. However, sometimes it gets confusing due to inconsistency of the names for the characters, kingdoms, troops, etc. etc. Also, there are a lot of redundancy in sentences in each chapter which hampers and reduce the enjoyment of reading the story. It would be nice if author can have the chapters proofread before uploading it.

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    Lord of the Oasis
    Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    I'm confused on MC's age. He's 10 years old in the servant quarter, was the timeline explained on how he became 12 years old in this chapter?

    Ch 32 Preparing to Descend the Mountain
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    Xianxia: I Can Download Fully Levelled Abilities
    Eastern · Annual Ruthlessness
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Commented

    the author messed up. this should be chapter 23....

    Ch 37 The Song Family Had Come to an End
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    I Can Cultivate With One Click
    Eastern · Financial Overlord
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  • Melayu
    Melayu2yr
    Replied to Mythfury

    Yeah, I agree. After chapter 10 I've already lost interest.

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    I Experienced an SSS Encryption
    Urban · Little Brother Langya
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  • Melayu
    Melayu3yr
    Commented

    For someone with 185 IQ, MC is terribly stupid and self conceited.

    Ch 21 The Portal - Part 3
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    The Abandoned Hunter
    Action · 1st_Manga_KING
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