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tacotrap

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I don't want to.

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  • tacotrap
    tacotrap8mth
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    can ==> can't

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    missing a word between "to" and "full power!". I would guess "use" here, but other words could also work.

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    piked ==> piled

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    I don't ==> You don't

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    I ==> I'll

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    I'll do stay ==> I'll stay

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    Replied to Phonybean6967

    It gave him the ability to not have his stats looked at, even by legendary level items. Rydel got the top tier blessing that gave invisibility around the same time, so I understand the confusion. And to be fair, several times the author mentioned taking off his cloak allowed people to read his level.

    Jack then equipped the low-level bracer. With it, he became invisible and started creeping through the forest.
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    what did you just day ==> what did you just say

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    Replied to Skeptical_Bookworm

    this

    The pact was quickly formed and Jack said a quick goodbye as he flashed away. Jack didn't want to spend another second there alone with Dragas, not with her still trying to entice him.
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    spellbooks from Daliea ==> spellbooks from Eedaj

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    "the thought of the soloing" => "the thought of soloing"

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  • tacotrap
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    I'm not sure if this is supposed to be "I have to evade him" or maybe "how to evade him". I'll try to comment as I go along.

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    I can only imagine that since the cash shop player had a bikini mail catgirl armor, this fine gentleman will have something just as nice.

    The cave wasn't very deep but that made it easy to find an archway with a name etched into the stone overhead. Reading the sign, "T1golBidd13s", Jack reached up and ran his hand over the lettering as he stepped inside. 
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  • tacotrap
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    Replied to TheSilverQuill

    thanks for the response! I'm currently around 375 chapters in. It's bothering me how often there are missing words, typos, and such. I'm enjoying the story as it develops, and I appreciate the thought put into the book. I am not a professional editor, but I wouldn't mind fixing some of the errors as I read the story. Although I've never done anything like that on webnovel. I usually just leave a paragraph comment with the typo in most novels I read, but this one has a typo a bit too frequently. Other than the frequent typos or missing words, the chapters continue to get better and better, like you said.

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    Neither of them had time to say another word or move another centimeter. The pillar of light consumed them and obliterated what remained of the central market below.
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  • tacotrap
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    Commented

    the description for stunning blow had something about static electricity building up in the fist or weapon to stun foes. makes sense the electric villain is immune. for someone who has experience in pvp and pve, end game content and every single achievement, you would think he would have better strategies and use his cheat system more often.

    Jack watched in horror and groaned as felt his body fight the numbing blow he had just taken. And his mind was rattled, trying to understand who Trank was unaffected by his Stunning Blow attack.
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  • tacotrap
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    rydel and one other go invisible, the 1 using the invisibility bracelet. once they get to a safe spot, they pass the bracelet to rydel to bring back to the next party member. now you repeat and your whole party just stealth missioned into the city.

    "I'm… not sure yet." Rydel shrugged, unhappy with his own lack of knowledge. "We don't know enough about these bounty hunters to plan effectively. So long as we get out and keep near the city, then I can do more reconnaissance and better take them into consideration."
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  • tacotrap
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    Commented

    I feel like they aren't using his highest tier God blessing in an effective manner. Have him go invisible, infiltrate the camp and chill. then when the opportunity arises, just dump some poison in the general (and possibly any high ranking officer's) cup. Head of the snake removed with no combat risk.

    One part of him knew that Rydel was completely right and logical to want an assassination. It was clearly the best deterrence and would be the fastest way to fulfill the plan. But it also meant that whoever did the deed was unlikely to survive afterward and anyone else in the camp would be in danger.
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  • tacotrap
    tacotrap8mth
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    I would have dropped this novel if the first 70 chapters weren't free. it took that long for the writing to start picking up and the author had less plot armor everywhere. The story has potential and as I read further and further along, I really feel like both the author and the story grow. I'm only 200ish chapters along and had to stop buying coins. I'll hoard up passes or hope it goes free again. still a few plot holes and poorly written chapters. also plenty of typos and such. An extra editor would really make this story shine. probably a slight rewrite of the first few chapters (50ish?). I like to come along for the ride and I hope you guys do too, I have high hopes for this one.

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    I feel like his fox is left out for most of the story, only appearing when convenient. I guess it just proves fire fox is worse than chrome.

    After leaving the Fat Goose Guild, the party went to the Adventurers Association headquarters and told them they would be leaving early. That way the association would send the new branch president without them and that they wouldn't need to worry about sending bodyguards with Jack.
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