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I don't want to.
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can ==> can't
missing a word between "to" and "full power!". I would guess "use" here, but other words could also work.
piked ==> piled
I don't ==> You don't
I ==> I'll
I'll do stay ==> I'll stay
It gave him the ability to not have his stats looked at, even by legendary level items. Rydel got the top tier blessing that gave invisibility around the same time, so I understand the confusion. And to be fair, several times the author mentioned taking off his cloak allowed people to read his level.
what did you just day ==> what did you just say
this
spellbooks from Daliea ==> spellbooks from Eedaj
"the thought of the soloing" => "the thought of soloing"
I'm not sure if this is supposed to be "I have to evade him" or maybe "how to evade him". I'll try to comment as I go along.
I can only imagine that since the cash shop player had a bikini mail catgirl armor, this fine gentleman will have something just as nice.
thanks for the response! I'm currently around 375 chapters in. It's bothering me how often there are missing words, typos, and such. I'm enjoying the story as it develops, and I appreciate the thought put into the book. I am not a professional editor, but I wouldn't mind fixing some of the errors as I read the story. Although I've never done anything like that on webnovel. I usually just leave a paragraph comment with the typo in most novels I read, but this one has a typo a bit too frequently. Other than the frequent typos or missing words, the chapters continue to get better and better, like you said.
the description for stunning blow had something about static electricity building up in the fist or weapon to stun foes. makes sense the electric villain is immune. for someone who has experience in pvp and pve, end game content and every single achievement, you would think he would have better strategies and use his cheat system more often.
rydel and one other go invisible, the 1 using the invisibility bracelet. once they get to a safe spot, they pass the bracelet to rydel to bring back to the next party member. now you repeat and your whole party just stealth missioned into the city.
I feel like they aren't using his highest tier God blessing in an effective manner. Have him go invisible, infiltrate the camp and chill. then when the opportunity arises, just dump some poison in the general (and possibly any high ranking officer's) cup. Head of the snake removed with no combat risk.
I would have dropped this novel if the first 70 chapters weren't free. it took that long for the writing to start picking up and the author had less plot armor everywhere. The story has potential and as I read further and further along, I really feel like both the author and the story grow. I'm only 200ish chapters along and had to stop buying coins. I'll hoard up passes or hope it goes free again. still a few plot holes and poorly written chapters. also plenty of typos and such. An extra editor would really make this story shine. probably a slight rewrite of the first few chapters (50ish?). I like to come along for the ride and I hope you guys do too, I have high hopes for this one.
I feel like his fox is left out for most of the story, only appearing when convenient. I guess it just proves fire fox is worse than chrome.