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Mogickan15hCommentedI must say, your style of writing lemons is so descriptive that my brain finds it hard to imagine it and i have to stop and focus on what i am reading and reread the same paragraoh several times before i can see it. Probably cause i am so used to the emotion style where the descriptions are designed to invoke emotions in the reader. But at the same time, i cant help but feel like the scenes are disjointed and could be worded better. Its hard to put into words this feeling or pinpoint what about it makes me feel that way. Hmm. Maybe it is the flow? How the scene flows or maybe it is bit of over describing? I just cant tell.
Ch 89 (R18) I will be gentle- Mogickan1dReplied to DaoistGreenOnion
Ur welcome, the novel is great. XD
Thus he had to expand his power horizontally, meaning become stronger while staying in the same realm. He thought of another auxiliary cultivation technique he could use at the moment. Since he would cultivate with Ye Ling and hopefully Sui Luxiao anyway, the energy he could not use for a cultivation base could be used for a method of increasing power without advancing. - Mogickan1dReplied to DaoistGreenOnion
It was mentioned at least 3 times that i recall.
Thus he had to expand his power horizontally, meaning become stronger while staying in the same realm. He thought of another auxiliary cultivation technique he could use at the moment. Since he would cultivate with Ye Ling and hopefully Sui Luxiao anyway, the energy he could not use for a cultivation base could be used for a method of increasing power without advancing. - Mogickan1dReplied to
As someone who is binge reading right now, i can tell you it was with yue(the manager) and i think ye ling as well.
Thus he had to expand his power horizontally, meaning become stronger while staying in the same realm. He thought of another auxiliary cultivation technique he could use at the moment. Since he would cultivate with Ye Ling and hopefully Sui Luxiao anyway, the energy he could not use for a cultivation base could be used for a method of increasing power without advancing. - Mogickan1dCommentedAs her moans were getting louder and sharper, he pinched her pink pearl and her lower body went up, gushing with abundant amounts of Yin Qi to the bedsheets all the way to the edge of the bed. She screamed with delight at her first orgasm from the touch of a man.
- Mogickan6dReplied to GodOfDeath1999Ch 49 Fairy Xiang Yun (1)
- Mogickan18dCommentedCh 155 Volume 10 : PROLOGUE
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Nah. She already made the first move with that wink. Lol
'So we are watching in her room! Awesome! That way, I'll be able to make the first move and see how she reacts.' Asher smiled in his heart, excited. - Mogickan29dCommented
Ass->was ?
And besides, the only way they would get caught ass if he wanted them to get caught or if they happened to be getting spied on by a powerful expert that intentionally went through a lot to not alert his spread-out senses. - Mogickan29dCommented
Ans -> and?
Raising her head and howling at the dawning sky, Zayda forgot to try for decorum ans really, Evian did not care either way. If they happened to get caught, he was much too shameless to care. He saw no reason he would need to feel ashamed that he was bringing a lover of his to pleasure, especially to strangers he had not even exchanged words with. - Mogickan29dCommented
Forgot the v in evianâs name
"~Oh Yesâ YESSSS~" Zayda groaned out loud and E Ian simply encouraged with even more enthusiastic squeezes of her tits. - Mogickan29dCommented
Typos in here⌠what is âhis be weâ?
Evian was at first disappointed to no longer have the funbags in his hold but was quickly appeased by his be we of Zayda's ass in all its rambling glory. Every strike it made against his crotch and the very lower part of his stomach, caused the voluminous backside to ripple. - Mogickan1mthCommented
She spoke up? I dont see her saying anything⌠author i think you let your imagination get carried away and forgot to write a few scenes. Lol
Assuming control of the Array Eye, Eren lightened Alephee's load upon his appearance within the Array Formation. As she observed Eren, she spoke up. - Mogickan1mthCommentedCh 646 A Bet (III)
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Couldnt help but ruminate on what Vesâs counter argument would be for several hours.. and remembered a certain CFA captain in charge of a CFA battleship that crashed on a certain planet who was a Five Scrols Compact member. If the CFA want to declassify the compact and use the fact that Vesâs mother is a member of the compact then why cant he tjrow shade on the CFA and bring up that captain. Question The Red CFAâs authenticity/lineage with this fact. Oh, and what about the fact that his mother was dead and or a spirit for most of his life and never taught him anything until recently. Amd rember that prophecy where ves was in chains? Depending on what happens next it might become reality.
Ch 5778 Distorted Retelling - Mogickan2mthCommentedCh 633 All Possibilities
- Mogickan2mthCommentedCh 168 Grappling with them cakes?!!
- Mogickan2mthReplied to Ayce_o_Spade