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it looks like his father was pissed off along with all the inhabitants of the island
Why is there no description of the world? It is only clear that this is not the Earth, because the structure of the world is completely different. It is still unclear how portals work. One gets the feeling that this is some kind of game, and not reality. Why do the same monsters appear every time you enter the dungeon? It seems that there are an infinite number of them. Where do they come from there? It is very strange that the author does not even try to explain this. And the main question - are all skills, without exception, active?
Author, do you run out of ideas to continue? I see no other reason to write half a chapter on what has already been said a hundred times. Again about limited talent, about the importance of the protagonist, his influence on the world, etc. Reading the last chapters, I no longer have the pleasure that I once experienced. The plot practically does not develop, the same words are retold in each chapter. Author, are you really happy to write novels with such low quality? Don't you have pride or what?
К чему было писать так много про его чувства? Автор уже неоднократно их описывал, мы прекрасно понимаем что он чувствует. Вместо этого логичнее было бы написать короткое "понял", "хорошо" и т.д. Главный герой - человек, который через многое прошел, с огромным опытом, зрелым взглядом на жизнь. Я считаю, что автор периодически забывает о данном факте, заставляя персонажа говорить наполненные драмой речи, но зачем? Здесь не сидят абсолютно глупые люди.