i hope u slow down with time and build ur world
thx for the chapter ... u skipped a lot of time .. slow down put some stories like his first mission .. take ur time
and btw don't listen to any criticism you are doing just fine with the story so far keep doing the awesome work . take your time dont be hasty with the story keep going on ur own pace
...................................... i really like what i am reading .............................
..................................... i recommend it ....
5 star from me .... hope u continue .. from what i read . i feel like i am reading a script .. u should add some life to the scene dont leave it to our imagination