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  • brokenteeth
    brokenteeth3yr
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    This fails in all aspects. It not only miseducates young readers and teaches them wrong ideas regarding medicine and medical emergencies it is also plagued with filler content and has a barely coherent plot. Characters are basically flat, unentertaining and the translation doesn't do justice to what's supposed to be the comedic effect of the original mandarin dialogues/interaction.

    altalt
    Demons Beside You
    Fantasy · Han Bao
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  • brokenteeth
    brokenteeth3yr
    Replied to pedodontic

    Don't blame the author. Most of people in China are that uneducated when it comes to medicine or emergency cases.

    Ch 4 Be A Non-Staff Doctor?
    altalt
    Demons Beside You
    Fantasy · Han Bao
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  • brokenteeth
    brokenteeth3yr
    Commented

    The author is clearly ignorant with how drugs worked. It isn't like alcohol.

    Drugs made one weak in the first place. If she had an empty stomach, it was even easier for her to overdose. It was the most fatal if she ingested the drugs but couldn't dilute it with food.
    altalt
    Demons Beside You
    Fantasy · Han Bao
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  • brokenteeth
    brokenteeth3yr
    Commented

    He deserves to have his license revoked. Manhandling patients using acupuncture in emergency cases is medical malpractice.

    He took out a set of silver needles and inserted them into her qimen, tiandu, and lingtai pressure points. He'd learned this acupuncture technique from a friend of his father. However, he never saw that man after his father passed away.
    altalt
    Demons Beside You
    Fantasy · Han Bao
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  • brokenteeth
    brokenteeth3yr
    Posted

    Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.

    altalt
    Conqueror of the Seven Empires
    Eastern · Meyk
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