both

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it is something new and sounds intresting. +1

this is not a question. +1

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didn`t minato use clones? they would cut the time shorter.

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don`t change the appeareance i like sukuna or chose yourself

i found it good it was something new and it didn`t looks like it is rushed or as if she feel just in love. that is my opinion but in the end it is your choice. I think, that if you listen to much to your readers your story won`t be as good. The best thing would be if you mostly or enterly ignore your readers opinions to the plot. Little changes are ok but more and gernerally (not all) authors make mistakes in the plot or it isn`t just not that good anymore. Fazit do what you like

seven sins a püwer for ervery sin

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irene or mira