Team Esme 🤙

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don't buy patreon 10$ supposed to be 10 chp ahead but it's the same 191....

I started reading this story when there was only 100 chp and now that we have 2099 i will say something this story is fan and at the same time complete shit if i could tell the me from the past not to read it... but I can't do that so i will tell u i am not recommending to read this story it will be fan at the start but to many plot holes and stupid decision just to make it keep going i think Mvs will end soon 100 chapters if he not dragging it more anyway this could have been better story, allot of people here love it more than what its deserve. if u still gonna read it than i hope u don't know what is really good story, than u can enjoy it even with all the stupid shit good luck

there was unnecessary explanation when i read that i felt like idiot, don't put word just to put word please the story was really good until he come back to the academy and now it's going down, i am not saying it to troll i really think u can do better

i think that the last couple of chapters were not that good the level droped... so i hope u will rise it

what happened with the max level ???????????????? who care about this shi.... romance

author where are you?

its so sad i made it here😭 i want moreeeee

She probably be the main villain

i wish u would explain shara power, because i cant understand how she so strong if she don't have anything special like Jerad even if she have a rainbow core

another oneeeeeeeeeeee

way so much nothing

he need to send him to db world to have some fair fight

good job ending it.👍

kawaki...?wt.. he isn't alive right now....

way pot the status twice u could have done it once and show us the value different u just want to add word to the chapter and its disappointing next month i will not buy privilege for your story and just wait month or two...

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predictable....