JustLetMeSleep
First, I love how the system were well-written. The characters especially the main lead narratives were clear and easy to read. She becomes a lizard and with a system, I will look forward to see her growth. Overall this book is a great read. I look forward for more chapters and definitely keep this on my collections. Great work author! And greatly recommended to those who love system stories.
Honestly love the novel, but it is painful for a rat enjoyer like me. So many rats perish in this novel. The loss of cheese boiz pains my heart but the quality of the book keeps me reading. I do ask for ”radical rat revenge” on at least the dude who shot that rat with the explody gun. Also for lizzy to confess her sins to pope rat (seen bellow)
Overall a good read, I'll point out a few points which I really liked. Your writing style is very interesting and it makes people read more, it would be better if you can edit your chapters one more time before you upload. The plot is good and I genuinely felt bad for the things she went through and all up for the revenge part with the system. Good work Author!!
The system used in the novel is unique and refreshing to read. It is intriguing to see how the mc will cope up with the system and how will she get revenge. Moreover, it's smooth to read along the chapters. Overall, the story is full of potentials because of the system used and the characters. Keep up the good work author!
Hello this is Brandon Gould the writer of the Tylingariea Epici am responding to a review swap that i sent earlier I have read a few chapters and am enjoying the book so far. but there were a few things that i could suggest Maybe put some more background detail on events that happen in the book as well as add diolage of what the people are saying so that the reader can understand more what is going on rather then being told what is happening. besides that the book has a good pace to it and will continue to see where it goes from here
This story is really arranged in great detail! The first chap is well written. All of it is very well explained, especially for the MC. Characters development are great! I've read a lot of books about System and not gonna lie that this book is one of the best book I've ever read! I read about five chapters only, but I'm hooked! Ha ha ha more power for you! [img=update] Keep it up, author!