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SO HOW MANY PETS DOESN HE HAVE!!??? AND WHAT ABOUT THE SNAKE AND ITS BABY!!?? HE SAVE D THE EGG AND PUT IT IN THE PET SPACE IT NEVER SAID THAT IT HATCHED!!! AND IT SAID WHEN IT HATCHES THE FIRST THING IT SEES IT TAKEA AS IT MOTHER!!! I REALLY WANT THE MC TO BE THE FIRST 1 IT LOOKS AT SO IT CAN THINK IT ITS MOTHER!!! BUT I REALLY WANT TO KNOW HOW MANY PETS IT HAS!! CAN U AT LEAST MAKE A LIST SO WE ALL KNOW WHAT HE HAS PLEASE!!!!!
MC is controlled by his girls as he is submissive type. Truly disappointed. Hope atleast his system will be his ultimate secret. Great plot. Skilled author. Anyway story is very good, MC should be the one in control of everything including girls with backbone, else how is he even going to tame gods when he can't even tame his master?. Thanks for this masterpiece. I will update my review later
This Novel has a grear storyline so far but some developments are swift and rash but overall it's a great novel just the part of harem is a little unhinged it would be better of mc could disguise well too when he might meet his so called family that dumped him hopefully there's a gradual improvement of Lin Fan's livelihood and cultivation alongside his women
That is a good work, be it the writing quality or the update schedule, it keep being on the good side. I only have one thing I found bad, the system haven't truly a characteristics, it don't feel like a taming system at all. More like a affection system or love system. It's not a bad thing but I can't help myself founding myself a bit disappointed by it, due to not respecting the title. Overall a good read.