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Reviews of Travelling through the heavens

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Travelling through the heavens

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Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Subpar. WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on (Better translation) or you may want to try grammarly & read English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. 3/5 SD: With an average to fast paced of development. Could've been better if author-san stick to one world development before jumping to a different world. There is no story/plot progression as MC moves to a different world. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs persona shifting is confusing as it in the early chapters he is amiable then when he jumped to DD world he suddenly becomes a typical Chinese-youngmaster. MCs behavior and progression is contradictory & thoughtless. 2/5 US: This is the only saving grace for this FF as the updates are up to speed. 5/5 WB: I really can't explain anything on this category since he jumped to otherworld too early & you will noticed that the details for BTTH & DD world wasn't explored properly. 2/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

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DogLickerGods
DogLickerGodsLv10DogLickerGods

Author, can you confirm how long it took the MC to get his harem? And who is the harem? I love reading fic like this but I need to confirm if there is romance in the harem? I mean usually china fic is always without romance and just MC's adventure which bores me. So how about this fic?

Ero_no_Kami
Ero_no_KamiLv4Ero_no_Kami

Haven't read this but i'd like to ask the sauce of the cover i can't find it in google image search ......................................................................................................

Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv4Novel_Guru

Author Got no Knowledge of BTTH and Dalou novel, when did medusa became as strong as dou Emperor and when did clear hammer Sect became more troublesome than God realm...

ABnox
ABnoxLv1ABnox

So, I'm giving this one 5 stars. As far as I read it is a Good fanfic and the author actually put some efforts to translate, unlike others who copy mtl directly and doesn't even bother to change the Grammar. I hope you don't drop it halfway..

ASH_MK
ASH_MKLv4ASH_MK

Author, can you tell me who is in the cover photo of the novel.Is it Medusa or Gu Xun'er. Or someone else.

Dohun88498
Dohun88498Lv1Dohun88498

Reveal spoiler

Ulala_Ulala_0517
Ulala_Ulala_0517Lv3Ulala_Ulala_0517

why did the mc become evil as soon as he came to soul land? like he was a good person before and then magically he became evil and wants to kill everyone?

Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv1Diky_Maulana

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Ashwani_bhardwaj
Ashwani_bhardwajLv1Ashwani_bhardwaj

Good fanfic with decent translation... .πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Just keep updating and don't drop.

Mathias_Irusta
Mathias_IrustaLv3Mathias_Irusta

Realmente me gusta mucho este fic, espero no quede a medias como muchas otras obras...gran trabajo hasta ahora! acΓ‘ dejo mis 5 estrellas esperando que continΓΊes como lo estΓ‘s haciendo...

Diky_Maulana
Diky_MaulanaLv1Diky_Maulana

Ini cerita yang sangat menarik dan bagus... Saya akan menantikan kelanjutan ceritanya... Tetap semangat author......πŸ˜‚πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘ŽπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

Tasha_Williams_0673
Tasha_Williams_0673Lv1Tasha_Williams_0673

Well, I officially like this novel more, even though I love douluo dalu the other fanfic the mc is weak and doesn't fight and spoiler it stays that way he always gonna be weak.

GokuSupreme
GokuSupremeLv3GokuSupreme

very good, I want more