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Evaluation: Subpar. WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on (Better translation) or you may want to try grammarly & read English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. 3/5 SD: With an average to fast paced of development. Could've been better if author-san stick to one world development before jumping to a different world. There is no story/plot progression as MC moves to a different world. 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MCs persona shifting is confusing as it in the early chapters he is amiable then when he jumped to DD world he suddenly becomes a typical Chinese-youngmaster. MCs behavior and progression is contradictory & thoughtless. 2/5 US: This is the only saving grace for this FF as the updates are up to speed. 5/5 WB: I really can't explain anything on this category since he jumped to otherworld too early & you will noticed that the details for BTTH & DD world wasn't explored properly. 2/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

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Travelling through the heavens

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