MegaC
I have only read the earliest chapters but I like the plot and story of it. The only problem for is that there is some misspelled words and some grammatical errors. And the dialogues are awkward and unnatural. Aside from those, I think this novel has a lot of potential. And I look forward for the development of this novel. And thank you for your hard work, sir author.
I'm on chapter 200 and i feel like mc is getting held back a lot by his sister. Him and Irene soul merges together when he saves her sister. I do feel like he uses her form too much and don't rely uses his ghost abilities. I feel like the ghost part has a lot of potential, but he fails to fully take it to his advantages. His most use ghost ability is possession and most of his abilities as a ghost is wasted.
This is by far one of the greatest stories I have read on this site. Transmigrated as a ghost has some of the most ambitious worldbulding I have ever seen. A vibrant world that mixes fantasy and modern elements nicely. This story is filled with a ton of different characters from a multitude of different races, and the scale of the story continues to get bigger later on. I love the main character as he is very kind yet doesn't let people belittle him or his friends. Marcus feels like a character who is truly invested in the new world he is in, which for most Isekai characters is somthing we never see as most Isekai characters will act downright delusional when they get Iskaied. A character like Marcus was definatly a breath of fresh air for me, also him being a ghost is such an interesting story aspect!!! Finally, the dungeons, fighting, and leveling system in this story are all top notch. The dungons can be fun and exciting to downright terrifiying when they need to be. The combat in this world has both weapons and magic being both viable while both being ever expanseve on how there used. And finally the leveling system is consistent unlike in so many other stories where the main MC can kill a bunch of mobs and get level 3267 in a year. Overall 10/10 story so far...
Just started, but it needs to be said that the grammar is terrible. The fisst 3 chapters have been edited, but they still read awkwardly. Too many commas and run ons. Like they had a bunch of run ons in the first place and tried to fix it by adding commas in weird places instead of rewriting the sentences. I do enjoy the use of the Oxford comma though, it is nice when they list various things and has it there.