TheDarkSide
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I very much enjoy the story. So far I am on Ch 125. I enjoy the way the author drops clues for the reader to see through things later on. It's enjoyable trying to figure out before hand. Other times author will not give enough making the reader wait to find out cause and effects. The author did not use a huge data dump for the background of the world and takes his time to give information out which I enjoy. I actually would really like to see a map if possible, though I have a decent idea from the explanations. The MC's nothing is free mindset is very refreshing. as well as his hints towards who he is. My only complaint would be the occasional grammatical error/ misspelling but the story is good enough to have them overlooked and they are easily revised.
I like how the book is written. I am not THAT far till now so it could have inproved. It is Not like the writing skills of the author are to high up but I'm a perfectionist so its quite hard to please me... However the really good thing about this is the style and Story development. Another big plus is that the author is pretty active in the commens as far as I can Tell. So far so good. Keep up the good work and remember, there is alwaya space for improvement :D P.S ignore my stability rating. I never pay attention to something like this so the rating could be incorrect.
Does anyone know a novel where a king of the spirits dies and reincarnates in the body of a child in a world where they can summon spirits and he summoned a spirit woman who did not believe he was the king and meets a snake that is the spirit that she invoked her friend there it was, when I read it I had 6 chapter
Thr writing quality is excellent , the way the author stitches together the plot and defined scenes is extremely satisfying, dark story lots of snu snu, the MC will be a hit or miss for a lot of people as he's quite edgy , for me it's worth the read.The novel kept me entertained throughout , I'm waiting eagerly for more chapters.
This novel is actually good if the author should use the character's name during the conversation, not use him and her. For example (I took this from chapter 22 atau 23): "I just hope you have yet to lose your skills." He muttered while he stood up. "What?" She could not hear clearly. "Nothing." He left. Just to read this conversation, I have to use my brain to determine who is speaking and who is answering. Actually it wouldn't matter if it was just one or two conversations like this, but these were all conversations in the novel using him and her, which gave him a headache.