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There are three chapters so it will be hard for me to determine to pace of novel. Aside from the story development, I am truly impressed by your writing style. The vocabularies are not repetitive and the word choice is great. (I noted some of the words hehe.) I was able to portray the looks of the characters within a few paragraphs. The scenarios are also described perfectly. I feel like I'm inside the novel itself. The world background is detailed and the punctuation marks, especially the commas, are used correctly. Nothing much to criticize about since the novel currently has three chapters. I wish all the best to author and keep on writing!
I'm speechless no words comes to my mind when I think of what to say about this. It was good, yes good, very good, I... Let's give it a 5 it was shorter than expected but tbh I got carried away reading it before I knew it I finished the whole thing and I seriously don't know what to feel about this, I was left speechless, no words it is! 3-4 hours I don't know but it took that much to finish 91 chapters, I got carried and blown away I guess?