Review Detail of NotUse in The Villainess and her Victim

There are three chapters so it will be hard for me to determine to pace of novel. Aside from the story development, I am truly impressed by your writing style. The vocabularies are not repetitive and the word choice is great. (I noted some of the words hehe.) I was able to portray the looks of the characters within a few paragraphs. The scenarios are also described perfectly. I feel like I'm inside the novel itself. The world background is detailed and the punctuation marks, especially the commas, are used correctly. Nothing much to criticize about since the novel currently has three chapters. I wish all the best to author and keep on writing!