Evil_Dragon
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
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A neat story, with a couple of interesting twists. Really long - these over 100 chapters aren't for show, or to artificially increase the chapters count. It is a story for many hours. Probably the most important thing - it's finished. The MC... Mostly, I would say that I liked him - especially when he acted like a funny, shameless xianxia protagonist. His anti-hero moments were ok. I had some reservations about his rants - while his talk with Sage was understandable since they were discussing philosophy, I disliked his rants directed at Sarutobi. Development - this is where I gave the story a full 5. Without spoiling too much - yes, he was trying to achieve standard highest power in this world, but through a much more different path - so no experiments with cells, etc. I also loved the way he planned for confrontation with Kaguya. As some reviewers mentioned, the timeline was slightly messed, but I wouldn't hold it against the author. After all, Kishimoto himself is responsible for this mess, and sometimes not following the order of events from canon can surprisingly straighten it up. The weakest part of this fanfic is the character design of some people, like Sandaime. In trying to bash him, the author made him a caricature of himself. I'm not even talking about him being evil - it's more that in reality, Hiruzen would quietly assassinate a clear threat much earlier. A much smaller problem that I noticed was with romance. It was cute, it was warm, but... there were some jumps, time-skips. Kushina and the MC are living together in the clan-house, they are friends. Suddenly in one chapter, I read that they are engaged and they kiss each other. Don't take it wrong, the kiss was sweet, but I would love to read a chapter where they discuss future marriage, something like "Konoha is against us. We have only each other. W- will you be my wife?". Similarly, in one chapter they were already married - once again, I would love to see their marriage ceremony, even if it was only going to Hokage tower and signing together some papers, blushing and answering some bureaucrat's questions. Despite some small inconsistencies, this is worthy fanfic, with a lot of good cliches and some new twists.
Is and probably will always be the best Senju descendant fanfic I have ever read. The MC is extremely op which is justifiable just by reading the title. I wouldn't want and its dumb to see the named true inheritor of hashrima to be pathetic and struggle on every enemy that he faced/would face right? And he's just the right amount of what Hashirama is and what he should have been in the series, unlike is muscleheaded, foolish, and merciful grandpa, the MC is cruel to his enemy, not the kind of MC who would enjoy torturing his enemies but the type of person who loves his people dearly, and would defend it from any type of person who wanted to ruin it. All in all, he's like hashirama 2.0 better, smarter, more decisive, and has better talent than him. Do read it everyone!
I'm surprised how good this fanfic is, and I absolutely love it how author bring the story with his own style. There's no much action of side characters so considering this like full blown mc fanfic, even tsunade or kushina didn't play a big role in the story. And absolutely no harem 10/10 I'll recommend this to my friends