Review Detail of redHussar in The True Inheritor of Hashirama's Legacy

A neat story, with a couple of interesting twists. Really long - these over 100 chapters aren't for show, or to artificially increase the chapters count. It is a story for many hours. Probably the most important thing - it's finished. The MC... Mostly, I would say that I liked him - especially when he acted like a funny, shameless xianxia protagonist. His anti-hero moments were ok. I had some reservations about his rants - while his talk with Sage was understandable since they were discussing philosophy, I disliked his rants directed at Sarutobi. Development - this is where I gave the story a full 5. Without spoiling too much - yes, he was trying to achieve standard highest power in this world, but through a much more different path - so no experiments with cells, etc. I also loved the way he planned for confrontation with Kaguya. As some reviewers mentioned, the timeline was slightly messed, but I wouldn't hold it against the author. After all, Kishimoto himself is responsible for this mess, and sometimes not following the order of events from canon can surprisingly straighten it up. The weakest part of this fanfic is the character design of some people, like Sandaime. In trying to bash him, the author made him a caricature of himself. I'm not even talking about him being evil - it's more that in reality, Hiruzen would quietly assassinate a clear threat much earlier. A much smaller problem that I noticed was with romance. It was cute, it was warm, but... there were some jumps, time-skips. Kushina and the MC are living together in the clan-house, they are friends. Suddenly in one chapter, I read that they are engaged and they kiss each other. Don't take it wrong, the kiss was sweet, but I would love to read a chapter where they discuss future marriage, something like "Konoha is against us. We have only each other. W- will you be my wife?". Similarly, in one chapter they were already married - once again, I would love to see their marriage ceremony, even if it was only going to Hokage tower and signing together some papers, blushing and answering some bureaucrat's questions. Despite some small inconsistencies, this is worthy fanfic, with a lot of good cliches and some new twists.