Reviews of The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory

Ayyy you're here, I've been reading your stories for quite some time now. (You probably know me as IWantToBeAGoodAuthor) Welcome man, I'll plan to read this someday 😸😸😸

What can I say, the writing is impeccable. I feel fulfilled reading this fic. This literally made me apply for a sick leave just to finish reading. Great chapter length, story progression, and character conversation. I wish 🥺 the author is just resting and plans to continue the fic cause this is very addicting.

This is probably one the better fanfics I read in a long time overpowered protagonist but no peanut gallery reactions every 5 minutes, the author knows how to show not tell.

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Amazing

this is the hands down best ff of TSCG I've every seen it won't disappoint anyone who reads it I've be reading it for a 3 days straight and I have to say it got me hooked if I could rate this 10/10 I would hope everyone who sees it give it a try

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

Great fanfic love the changes you made and the possible outcomes so far <3

I see vain this means it'll be good, been reading VIMS and returning transcendent in SH and hoping for those to be added here too. For now I'll take a look at this and the other one, been trying to read more of your work so I'm pumped to read this one.

10th review. Read this on Scribble Hub. Masterpiece of a Scog fanfic. Writing quality is top notch, as expected from an experienced author. Story development is similar to cannon. The character design is anti hero but with morals. If you ever wanted a Jihu that is not a naive two goody shoes, then this novel is for you. ............ ......... ...... ...... ...... ...... ..... ....... .....

it's refreshing to see a second coming of Gluttony like this. if you like the original, then you should like this one too. bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

This is undoubtly best the sec coming of gluttony fanfic i have ever read. And also that mushoku tensei? absolutly worthed my time. Thank you very much for these amazing fanfics. i also hope that you can do Reverend insanity and lotm fanfics.

it's been so long since I seen a second coming of gluttony fanfic here, I think I might cry 😭 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

81 juicy chapter in one go. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .… . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .… . . . . .… … … … . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .…

The Chinese have many ideas that sound bad on this side of the world, that's why I like the fic that changes the protagonist and the plot, unfortunately this fic has nothing, it follows the canon without changes, I tell you that the protagonist is more powerful, which makes it ridiculous. that everything stays the same

Great story bro I really like the mc new personality and how story starts but please upload new chapter more regularly 👍👍👍👍 [img=update][img=update]

As someone that read this initially on SH (and binged it in the span of a day), I can say this is one of the most well-written and engaging pieces of fiction I've personally experienced.

This is an utterly fantastic story! But you should keep something in mind when reading this: A butterfly flapping its wings can create a hurricane. So, take a breath, be patient, and be in awe of the eventual hurricane!

You seem to have in depth knowledge of MEMORIZE... Do you have any plans on doing a fanfiction on the Franchise? So far I'm loving your outstanding work on SCOG and Mushoku Tensei...

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