blowfish1407
I was just tired of reading novels where ML's abusing the FL and they still get together in the end. Lol. When I came across this novel. I thought it was just an ordinary historical novel since the synopsis didn't mention much but gurrrrls.. I was stomped with the back story. Like was she a fallen Goddess or some thin? Seems like the FL was from the waaay future or a different world. I am still on the first 5 pages and I am hooked. You guys should read and support the author. This is a hidden gem.
I absolutely love the story. This is one of the most amazing story in webnovel. This story does not only focus on fl and ml but each and every character is brought to life including the most evil ones. And the amazing portrayal of feelings of each character is what will connect us to them in such a deep level. I have laughed and cried with them so much. Not only emotions but the story has an super plot with steady devlopment. The story has everything be romance, friendship, suspance. When ever I have to wait for update I just go read the novel from start and it never gets boring no matter how many times I read it. I am one of the most silent reader but I just had to write this review so others can also get to know this amazing story. As for the downside there are grammatical errors but it can be ignored in light of the story.
I just discovered this gem yesterday and I'm still on chapter 200+ and have not yet reached the end of the updated chapters. This is one of the times I still continued reading despite the many grammar errors and mistakes in this story just because I was captivated by the plot, the mysteries and the overall interaction of the characters. I can't count how many times I laughed and cried reading this story and I'm still not halfway through the updated chapters lol. I just came here to leave my review and if author blowfish needs someone to proofread or edit some of the chapters in your story, I can help if you want since I really don't want this story to be underrated or somethin. ๐๐
This one of story i like to read. Writing quality its written good. As reader i enjoy reads the story. just decrease writing repeating some words on chapter. Hope author can do some double check and revised about it for make story more better. Can author make some separate Line if author want make different story? Maybe finishing one arch first before write other side story which still includes on one arch. Story development so far good. Author only need more improvement about it especially when author want describe what FL (lory) face on past life or ML life. Character Design on this story describe very well. How author describe every character on this story, its very well written on story including interaction between main, support and side character written very well. suggestions author can make more side story for main character and support character without lose main purpose story. World background description with good. I feel like author can make it more specific for world background. i still confused between two world did they modern, ancient or mix world especially the world which FL lived right now. Overall its good story. thank you for created good story to reads.
One of the best action/love/romance/mystery novels period! Easily this could be a movie. What you see in your minds eye is a movie. Only a few on this site at the same level as the novel. AND for some reason itโs ----.Author thank you! Your dedication to this story, to the characters, to us the readers we appreciate it. Hope you get what you should from all you hard work!