Review Detail of mounty in The Princess and The Lord

This one of story i like to read. Writing quality its written good. As reader i enjoy reads the story. just decrease writing repeating some words on chapter. Hope author can do some double check and revised about it for make story more better. Can author make some separate Line if author want make different story? Maybe finishing one arch first before write other side story which still includes on one arch. Story development so far good. Author only need more improvement about it especially when author want describe what FL (lory) face on past life or ML life. Character Design on this story describe very well. How author describe every character on this story, its very well written on story including interaction between main, support and side character written very well. suggestions author can make more side story for main character and support character without lose main purpose story. World background description with good. I feel like author can make it more specific for world background. i still confused between two world did they modern, ancient or mix world especially the world which FL lived right now. Overall its good story. thank you for created good story to reads.