SomeSpookyGuy
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I really enjoy the story so far. If you like Op MCs and wirld traveling then this is your thing. On point of criticism I want to metion is that although tomance is mentioned but the heroinein this place Kaguya doesnβt have any character development and a minimal amount of screen time. But the Author also said it will only be slight romance so. Well a bit more interactions would be nice.
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Plot is below average even when it comes to wishfullfilment OP Mcβs. The MC is nothing really special, you wonβt exactly hate nor love him, he is just there. Story is kinda clumsy and monotone and what bugs me more than anything author couldnβt be bothered to use proper punctuation like any normal person that has been through elementary school. Instead of basic quatation marks ie. ββ, the author uses [ ] to mark speech in paragraphs which is annoying as h*ll considering most use ot for system remarks or voices inside a characters head, instead of regular speech. Grammar is meh aswell, itβs readable but you can find mistakes quite often. All in all, if you can find something better, you shouldnβt bother with this fic. Personally Iβm scarping the bottom of Naruto fic barrel so here I am, left fisaapointed once again.
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i like your synopsis. just it. the lemme fill this review with words. just want to tell you some useless information. today in my zoom class i over slept and my mechanical material teacher called my name and dozens of dozens my freind filling my phone history which is usually empty. the this guy, the teacher like, hey.. why you late, bla bla then after he check my attendance i go back to sleep. hahaha what a lovely teacher just if he didn't gave tons of task for us.
This is probably my favorite Novel i have read yet with hopefully a Kaguya pairing. This is literally the first novel i have read with a Kaguya pairing and it is great. Alex has his own personality and doesn't always do what people tell him to, he mostly does it because he eventually got bored of doing his usual stuff. It also has some comedy on the newer chapters with Sasuke and a few good jokes here and there. The creator has expanded upon the Naruto-verse in an interesting way which truthfully was a good point rather than just being able to predict everything because you have read it before. Overall this novel is great with a probable Kaguya pairing, world building, some good plot, and some comedy.