Yumesumera
Hello readers! The author is here with a review, I am thrilled at your response to my novel. Thanks for 100k views in this short amount of time; your enthusiasm and curiousness made me wants to write a good novel for you all, so I'm deeply thanking you for your acknowledgements of my work. There are some simple grammatical mistakes around 20-25 chapters but they won't make any problems in your reading. But don't worry I will correct them later. Here is my 5-star review of my, own work. It is because as an author I come to know it is hard to start when you take your first baby step but you learn to run on your own. Writing gave me a lot of self courage to do something on my own and present myself to others and I will continue on this path. So, keep giving me your constant support. Sincerely, Thank you!
Incredible plot! It's difficult to write dark-themed stories with likeable characters. But you managed to do just that. Usually, I'm not a huge fan of adult(ish) themes, pregnancy and all. But I enjoyed myself here. Hence, the five star. After hitting a certain amount of chapters, you should regularly check for consistency. And I think maybe a month or two from now, seven chapters a week might be overbearing. But try your best throughout! Good luck![img=recommend]
hello there. All i can say is that the plot and by extension the story has a lot of potential, the characters interactions are nice and enjoyable. Itβs also easy to follow the plot of the story from the get go allowing the story to have a good flow. If there was something I have to point out to be improved upon, it would be the structure of the phrases that sometimes can be out of place, though they do not distort the meaning nor is there much in terms of grammar mistakes. Over all itβs a nice read that I can recommend and I have no doubt that the author will get even better with more experience as they writs this story. Good luck to you in all you endeavor.
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