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THE MAFIAS FORBIDDEN LOVE

Author: Lollita19pie
Contemporary Romance
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Kei_Hofer
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I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~

Fallency
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Too few chapters to write a review, but so far so good. Pace is a little slow and the story follows some common tropes, but it is easy to read. A synopsis, frequent updates, and cover could do wonders! Sending the author some good vibes! Keep writing!

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After 7 years away, Alessia Guerrilla is returning to Italy to step into her role as the CEO of her company. The last time she was in this country she just so happened to leave her fiancé at the altar; a small piece of unfinished business that will undoubtedly come back to bite her. Especially given that her ex was none other than Don Marco Morlachi (and yes, that’s Don as in bullets flying and a family business that was not always conducted in the open) and she was returning with his 6yo miniature carbon copy in the shape of her much loved 6 year old son, Leo. It seems that her unfinished business will be keeping her busy for a while. With 5 chapters up, this story has some familiar tropes paving the way forward but it’s enticing to see how the MCs will reconcile their past and future. And I am interested in what triggered the FLs decision to break the heart of the man she seemed to care for and deny him knowing his own child for so long. The writing style is easy to read but would benefit from some descriptive language. I have no idea what the FL looks like; is she short or tall, plump or slim, dimples or serious? Her hair and eye colour are all a mystery. That’s just sad when you’re already broaching the 6th chapter and haven’t even gotten a hint of her style. There are also some grammatical errors, repeated paragraphs, and random typos that indicate a need for a basic proofreader. But the story has potential. Good luck to the author ✌🏻

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