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There is EVERY way to avoid it. Even at the altar, you can turn back with a “No”. It’s not like someone is holding a shotgun to her back after all. Already making excuses but ok 🤷🏼♀️
If he could attack and all but kill his tiny daughter, then this shouldn’t surprise me 👀😵💫
She really is the most loathsome of women..
Atrocious beginning with gender pronouns swapped practically every sentence. Story immediately enters into life threatening conflict between 2 presumably female combatants but as the reader idc. Can’t tell one from the other half the time and it’s a confusing mess of characters and their shared history amidst what will likely be the MCs death and rebirth arc. Story needs adjectives, a proof reader who understands basic English, and some depth to the characters that would make the reader prefer one over the other. I would rather put this story aside and find one to spend my time & money on that doesn’t make me feel like I am a code breaker.
The subtleties of his instructions 🤷🏼♀️. My thoughts were my initial ones in response to what was said. It’s ok because as you read further the complexities start to be clear. It’s good because it gives you the ‘knee jerk’ disbelief and the “hmm 🤔” moment of challenging why that was my snap ‘go to’ thought. I like how your story challenges the readers morality, values, and thoughts in a with the acknowledgment that we are all different and the product of our experiences. But it’s important to not be rigid and inflexible (like that Heaven guy). ✌🏻
No. It makes sense with that explanation ty ✌🏻
Understandable 🙂↕️😂
Exactly lol 😅😂
Uh oh 😂🤣
Toddlers and food. Even those who weren’t a flower once can have a stellar memory for promises made for treats 🙂↕️
Charming,, 🙄
Just fellow villagers it seems.
Lol! That makes so much sense in it weird “I was once a flower” way 😂
Yang Ruxin has no need for TV. This village (and her old family) provide all the entertainment needed 👀