Reviews of The Lust System
The Lust System
Elfriedenn
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Still love this book but author hasn't updated for several months, still hoping author will come back to finish what he started 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Dear Author, You have a good starting point here as you just made yourself in the 17th as of now, in your very first week. Don't bother with some bad comments about your novel as it's clear to everyone just how much other people prized your novel. Held your head high and straighten up your back. You have a lot of expectation from people. Keep typing and never cease to improve. Keep up your good work! Best Regards, A Younger Sister Account of a Fellow Author ;)
This is a very dumb story. The world, the actions of the heroes, the logic of their actions and reactions to what is happening are so unrealistic that you cannot imagine. The system is so imbalanced that you would quit this game in five minutes. It gives mega cool skills at the very beginning and mediocre then, destroying the idea of development. There is no cultivation, only the will of the author and an endless combination of circumstances. Erotic scenes are so unrealistic. Poor girls have only three (one double) buttons and always maximum excitement (really, always 100%), while the partner acts only with an aura. And the main character is always ready to fight. (Yes, that's right, you already know who (or what) is the main character here) Summary. Read it as a farce, a comedy, a common sense tragedy. Prepare facepalms. You have been warned.
Stability of Updates : No updates Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all Because of late update you are not getting power stone at all
As of 25.01.2020 (day.month.year) the Novel is on hiatus, the Author didn't do anything the past 2 months on his Patreon either. short: The novel is a good smutty read and it caters to a specific Fantasy of a few sis-cons. Writing Quality: The Quality of the writing is decent, some things could be better and mistakes are made which don't prevent understanding but are anoying to read. Stability of Updates: as of now the novel is on hiatus. 25.01.2020 (day.month.year) no comment.... Story Development: The story has a steady push forward, the characters get better at everything on a steady pace. Character Design: The Main Characters have a decent enaugh background story to them, Since the Author didn't write more chapters as of now, the Background to the other Characters that I think will be major Sidecharacters is to be desired. World Background: The world is a vast place, but it needs fleshingout.
One of the best Original novel out there. For me, it's one of my top 5 lists of R18 novels; along with Sinful life The Emperor, Super Sex System, Prince of Domination, and The Hentai System. Although for me there is some problem like RAPE. But it is still within the boundary of acceptable... FOR ME!!
