Review Detail of Valloncur in The Lust System

As of 25.01.2020 (day.month.year) the Novel is on hiatus, the Author didn't do anything the past 2 months on his Patreon either. short: The novel is a good smutty read and it caters to a specific Fantasy of a few sis-cons. Writing Quality: The Quality of the writing is decent, some things could be better and mistakes are made which don't prevent understanding but are anoying to read. Stability of Updates: as of now the novel is on hiatus. 25.01.2020 (day.month.year) no comment.... Story Development: The story has a steady push forward, the characters get better at everything on a steady pace. Character Design: The Main Characters have a decent enaugh background story to them, Since the Author didn't write more chapters as of now, the Background to the other Characters that I think will be major Sidecharacters is to be desired. World Background: The world is a vast place, but it needs fleshingout.