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Why do you keep changing the objectives? None of your Character's objectives are really finished or even started. It is like you are a cook making cake. Then quarter way through making it. You throw it out the window. Now you start cooking steak and again you throw it out before we (the readers) even had a chance to smell the steak or even hear it been put in the pan. Neither the cake ingredients nor the steak was bad. They had potential but you threw away. Why?
still cant understand the age of their family, story sometimes gets boring due to so many time skips, and every now and then they keep shouting "what???" it feels like everything is too easy for mc and of course he have OP luck, no one will believe that till now (many billion years) not a single person ignored the voice chose not enter a single door and only mc got to both doors. characters are too trusting, and mc wont care about secrets and keeps telling everyone lol and some how everyone who joins under mc will have 100% loyalty and trust for no reason, and characters dont act their age. writing feels *******ish, but like the world background and background story very much. i think novel has improved in late chapters, may be ill continue after novel is finished
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