Review Detail of undead282 in THE KING OF THE UNIVERSE

Why do you keep changing the objectives? None of your Character's objectives are really finished or even started. It is like you are a cook making cake. Then quarter way through making it. You throw it out the window. Now you start cooking steak and again you throw it out before we (the readers) even had a chance to smell the steak or even hear it been put in the pan. Neither the cake ingredients nor the steak was bad. They had potential but you threw away. Why?