MishaK
The Inconvenient Wife is a story that started out with Rohan a man from a well-to-do family who was going out with two women (Sneha and Stella), the relationship seems somewhat intense *that's what it appeared as to me.* "Unable" to bear the pressure from his family. Rohan chooses to marry Sneha instead, along the way he appears to be conflicted towards his new wife and ex-girlfriend.
Sweet novel, read all chapters and my heart goes to Sneha for enduring a loveless arrange marriage, but later in the story, his husband finally fall in love with her. All is good. I wish to know who killed Stella, hope the author will reveal the killer soon. It's a delicious captivating story, fluid in story development. Character design is well laid out. Writing quality is good. I recommend this novel to girls and women who love romantic story. Good read and easy to digest! Great romantic love story, worth reading! Good job Author.
Okay, I don't like the fact that Rohan did not outright tell his parents that he has a girlfriend of five months, but still chose to accept the arranged marriage to Sneha. Why I love the fact that Sneha made her choice and that choice forced Rohan to think over what he wants in life. You go Sneha~ I guess I can forgive him that he apologizes and accepts his feelings for Sneha. However, it gets a little confusing towards the latest fifteen chapters. Did we go from a time skip from Stella's death to what happened before her death? The fact that she's a delusional stalker and would-be murderer on our main couple's honeymoon. What ever happened to her reporting about the supposed sexual harassment of her "boyfriend"? Just remembered, did he ever broke up with her, it just states that he's been transferred. 😂 So thanks for the novel. P.s. Dunno how it's spelled like in my language, but Sneha if pronounced "Snae-ha" means "Love". ヾ(¯∇ ̄๑)
I understand how some people can give this story a good review. The writer obviously has potential and the story seems interesting. However, the plot is completely messed up. I’m not sure if the author outlined their story prior to make sure that things are cohesive since there are certain chapters that just seem random. The writing style is good. The updates are good. The direction or overall story background is good. Just the way it’s written is confusing. There is no prologue that introduces the situation your just thrown in. The characters aren’t really introduced or built up. The conflict is just bamn in your face but there’s no build up, explanation, or even details. I don’t wanna give anything away just know you can tell the author didn’t really plan what they were writing and the order of the chapters should probably be changed. It’s a good concept for a story but needs a lot of work.
I enjoyed this book literally from the first sentence to the last. I especially loved the way the author began in the first half of the book telling about a young couple in the present tense and a deranged Ex and then in the second half goes back to the young couples childhood days and tells their parents story. This book had me literally sitting on the edge of my seat at times because my suspense hit a peak and I couldn't stop reading. It's a wonderful mix of love, suspense, devastation, and hint of actual realization perfectly blended together in one story. I applaud the author for an amazing well written book. For me to actually read a book in 1 day it really had to been good!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story between characters were great and interesting however the whole story jumped around. I couldn't figure out if they were flashbacks or memories. What happened to Sneha and Rohan? Did they die? And why/how did the story end with Sneha's & Ankor's childhood tragedy? I was so lost. It was like 5 stories in 1 novel.
The story type is not one I'd usually read. It was an interesting and suspenseful romance with some really solid characters and dynamics, especially with the parents and children. It was interesting to see that the marriage was arranged with the best interest of the children in mind. The grammar is a bit shaky in places, but doesn't detract from the flow. Overall, good story thanks for sharing.
I really like how you really brought your characters to life and how you introduce us to the mindset of a certain culture where arranged marriage is normalized. I think the writing quality is A+! Interested to see if Sneha will end up with her ******* husband or not (personally I wanna see her find a better man, or at the very least slap him into shape haha)