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I understand how some people can give this story a good review. The writer obviously has potential and the story seems interesting. However, the plot is completely messed up. I’m not sure if the author outlined their story prior to make sure that things are cohesive since there are certain chapters that just seem random. The writing style is good. The updates are good. The direction or overall story background is good. Just the way it’s written is confusing. There is no prologue that introduces the situation your just thrown in. The characters aren’t really introduced or built up. The conflict is just bamn in your face but there’s no build up, explanation, or even details. I don’t wanna give anything away just know you can tell the author didn’t really plan what they were writing and the order of the chapters should probably be changed. It’s a good concept for a story but needs a lot of work.

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The Inconvenient Wife

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