Reviews of The Illicitous Dungeon
The Illicitous Dungeon
Wolfick
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Damn!! this one is going to be a good one if its not droped, hope everything goes well with the autor on this novel and bring us more chapters as good as ALL the previus ones
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An amazing Dungeon-Building story so far that keeps the reader engaged and heavily entertained. I've looked for more kingdom-building novels in the past and this one certainly scratched that itch, it has a great sense of how to describe and detail cities, builds within the dungeon, the people and their emotions connected to the story. I've thoroughly enjoyed this novel so far, mostly because the writing style is far out immaculate and hints at the Author being a true wordsmith. Normally I'm not a big fan of big harem 18+ novels but this one hasn't gone over board so far, which is a plus point for me. Every female the MC comes into contact with is described well and fits into the story, they're not just filler. All in all I hope the Author can get contracted and keep pumping out chapters for us because he has had some trouble with that in the past, which is obvious but when writing this isn't your full day to day job. But I hope I'll get to read a lot more per week soon, I for one will fully support this novel to the best of my abilities. Thanks for writing Author and keep the chapters flowing! ❤️
Indeed, very interesting novel. If you're used to reading at ' Dungeon Novels ', this novel is definitely a good read. It has a proper plot and characters' developments. The characters are amazing but in my opinion, ' Dialogues ' between characters are so firm and it makes this novel into a good read. A novel that has proper characters. It lacks a lot of elements like villains. still a beautiful story.
Wow! Just wow. I'm 110 chapters in so far and just realized I haven't left a review yet. I have been binging this book like crazy the last 2 days and am amazed by the quality of the writing. Many webnovels seem to focus on quantity instead of quality but this one really focuses on quality above everything else. I can see release rates are a little lower than the mass produced novels on this site but I am actually grateful for that if I get to read high quality work like this. Thank you for the brilliant read Mr. Author.
Writing and Grammer Quality: 5 Stars. Its a great story with little grammer mistakes Updating Stabability: 5 Stars, definitly updates more than me Story Development: 5 Stars. Love the story development, hope to see more monsters in the future! Including something like Sentient(intelligent) Dryads(from the lewd scenes with forest elf) Character Design: 5 Stars. love all the charcters, especially the lewd dungeon World Background: 5 Stars.
Great, in order to make this more stable, the author needs to make the mc be a bit more human like or just understanding humans more. Hope there isn't going to be big harems in order to make more villagers. Also to give as a idea, I hope the author slowly starts to create a S rank dungeon. Can't say much with world back ground since I'm in chapter 26.
Grammar doesn't break the immersion and I know I'm not good at english, that's why translation quality is 5 star. Updating stability though, only 4 star as author is busy. Story development which mixed multiple tropes such as summoned heroes, reincarnated to non human mc, and others are blended well. Character design is good. Althought there's no much improvement, it's not needed. World backround still a bit foggy, but it would be introduced in the later chapters. Overall, it's a masterpiece. The only problem I can spot is I want more and the stability is not that good.
What can i say, it's a really good novel. English is almost impeccable, the writing flows smoothly, the dialogues feel real (for a fantasy novel), there's no edgy stuff, the paragraphs aren't kilometers-long just to embellish what would have normally been a 5-words sentence with tens of useless and pompous words; so yes, 5 stars on writing quality. Story development is also quite good, no irritating fillers to try and stretch the plot, it's steady; yes, with a writing quality of this caliber i would have hoped for a 1000 chapters novel, but you can't have everything in life, so yes 5 stars on this one too. Character design is good too, characters are fleshed out, but it suffers inevitably a bit from what most of harem novels suffer, which is the absence of personality in mc's partners; now, author has actually made an excellent work with them, it's not his fault, and the problem is reeeeaaaaaallly small compared to most of the harem novels out there where women become just pretty action figures the mc collects with absolutely zero emotional depth and even less plot weight, here they are properly fleshed out people, with unique personalities, but it's inevitable that when more and more women become part of his life, the time dedicated to each character is inevitably limited, so they are properly and richly introduced, perfectly fleshed out, but with the passage of time they get less "time on screen", if we call it like that, so less time to continuously express their quirkiness and differences (apart from their powers, which by the way are actually impactful on the plot, so yeah, women finally demonstrate to be capable of being more than just useless cocksleeves like in other novels hurray!); as i said, compared to other novels the problem is incomparably small, but it's still there, so yeah, 4 stars on character design.(btw, other characters aside from mc's partners are properly fleshed out as well, forgot to mention it) I cant say much on uptating stability because i essentially devoured this novel in a day and a half, but based on other reviews and on the upload dates of every chapter it doesn't seem really stable, quite the contrary; i'm not really complaining considering the novel's quality, but yeah 3 stars on uptating stability. Word background may seem a bit confusing at the beginning, but then it's properly explained, and it's fascinating and mysterious to say the least, 5 stars on that. Overall a really good novel so far, i'm really excited for it's future "development", i reccomend you try it. Also, i've read some reviews talking about ntr....i honestly can't understand where they see ntr, all the women he didn't take where clearly those he wasn't interested in enough....nobody cheated on him or betrayed him, so no, no ntr in my opinion, you can rest assured 😐. And yes, i must say it, i HAVE TO SAY IT, I CAN'T STOP MYSELF..... English isn't my first language, so sorry if you find a bit of grammer in this review.
