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Sin_Of_Gluttony5mthCommentedCh 2810 Not my Son (Part 2)- Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrCommented
Honestly is kind of disappointing to see so many errors, misspelled words, half finished sentences and everything...
Today was my last day in the plains before. Actually, it was more like my last few hours as from what Zirani had said, we'd be living a few hours after the rising of the sun, around noon. In a few hours, I would leave behind the plains, my home for most of my life, and where I'd met Zirani, Sandra, and Misty. - Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrReplied to I_S_Rift
i'll trust you
"Bind her or burn her," were the last words I heard before I blinked my eyes open and let out a groan of pleasure. - Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrCommented
I honestly don't understand the point of writing these dreams if he literally doesn't remember anything once he wakes up. I mean, they don't add anything to the story.
"Bind her or burn her," were the last words I heard before I blinked my eyes open and let out a groan of pleasure. - Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrCommented
*if anything
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*tried
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*overload
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*wrapped
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I really like his awkwardness, it shows how he's not perfect in everything
"I don't like promises. Nothing is a hundred percent certain-," began Aldrich, but then he noticed the Chrysalis getting even more nervous and Valera giving him a disapproving look. - Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrCommented
Then why did you even ask how many strands she wanted ?
Davis raised his hand, displaying his index and middle finger to her, "I'll give you two strands of refined heavenly lightning." - Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrCommented
She didn't say that 😐
"… Because… because Myria said… you would abandon me..." - Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrCommented
I really don't understand why you are writing like this. Just say three....
As for Ancestor Dian Alstreim, he had also reached High-Level Law Rune Stage and had improved his Rune, allowing it to upgrade into a fourth level Rune, a Formidable Rune that increased his prowess by two, no, three levels! - Sin_Of_Gluttony1yrCommented
Very cool, except for the name
"Indeed," The Ice Phoenix Mistress expounded, "Because we're sisters, no, twins of the same blood, born from the same womb, it is possible for the inheritor to inherit our blood of different nature. If lucky, even inherit what is supposed to be a terrifying Supreme Law, the fusion of Ice Laws and Fire Laws, Icefire Laws." - Sin_Of_Gluttony2yrCommented
I'll never get over the suspicion that you're actually just translating a chinese novel 😂
The moment they stepped past the rift, they quickly did a search and found out that there was only one other rift leading to another location like before. They kicked the air and rushed in that rift's direction! However, swaths of dirt surged up in the barren land as a plethora of mindless savage beasts attacked them, appearing poisonous and deadly as they waved their fangs and stingers, intending to cause them harm. - Sin_Of_Gluttony2yrCommentedCh 176 Epilogue - Princess in the Castle
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I think this "it's all my fault because I'm too weak" trope among his women is starting to get old..
"If I was only stronger like sister Lea and made the Alstreim Family impregnable, he… he wouldn't have needed to make a decision like that. I'm sure what he did hurts him as well. Otherwise, he wouldn't be the person I fell in love with. It's all my fault." - Sin_Of_Gluttony2yrCommented
We've seen this cliche so many times, and yet, if properly executed, it's still enjoyable Good job author.
I was doing the same, unable to comprehend what a gale wolf was doing this close to West Vale. In our classes, we'd been taught about many aether beasts, especially those around West Vale so I knew that gale wolfs were found far outside of West Vale, and yet here one was. Its fur was grey and it had a mane of pure white fur around its neck that moved as though by an invisible wind. Its eyes were black and its fangs looked sharp enough to cut through flesh with ease. - Sin_Of_Gluttony2yrCommented
WHAT
"Back then, I was unknowingly happy when I came to know that you were a being like me, a reincarnator... but you just had to go ruin it all instead of cooperating with me, your father, HUH!?" - Sin_Of_Gluttony2yrReplied to Sweet_Tea
Sure 🤷🏻
Lith drowned himself with work to not think about Manohar's death. He had lost a friend, a mentor, and his best shot at fixing his life force without the need to resort to forbidden magic to solve his reincarnation problem. - Sin_Of_Gluttony2yrReplied to Sweet_Tea
Look man, let's stop here We're both clearly not understanding each other and this discussion has been all but useless. I'm not even going to bother listing the amount of times it has been stated by the author that Lith is no genius and is moderately talented at best.
Lith drowned himself with work to not think about Manohar's death. He had lost a friend, a mentor, and his best shot at fixing his life force without the need to resort to forbidden magic to solve his reincarnation problem.