Pegaz
The story is quite interesting. I like this story, but having problems with understanding what writer want to communicate. May be because of my poor English, I have had hard time in interpreading some words that writer using. eg. "sprinter" in mc skill. In my perception, I connect this word with something like speed. However, in the story, this word refers to staminar consumption rate which confusing me a lot. Another eg. is the word Maximum. For me, this word represent the most number that can have. But in this story tend to use it as actual number that have. Up until now, I still cannot really understand Max Ideler and Max Waorker. What are the real meanig and function of these tow word? To sum it up, I got cunfusing every chapter. Thus, whenever there is the stat explanation, I just skip it and go on. Thanks for the story. I enjoy it a lot even with some confusing along the way.
I'm really a fan of idle games so I was so excited when I found a system that uses the concept. It's a good story, but I'm not a fan of the writing. Everything, from the conversations to inner monologues, just seems so synthetic. People don't talk like that. Then there's the info dumps. It got a lot harder to read after the MC met some people, since that's when the writing issue crops up. It needs work, and I hope the author can improve as he writes this.
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If you have brains, don't read this. The MC is retarded beyond belief. He starts out pretty smart and makes good choices regarding his idlers, but 20 chapters in, he spends 2 years killing bears, because 1 of them almost killed him? It gets worse apparently, because i dropped it after reading comments on the next chapter. Apparently he buys clothes for millions (he got money from the bears), tries to hide his storage ev.... I'm done, i can't be asked to waste on more time on this disappointing novel. Retarded mc end of story.