Review Detail of Janosario in The Idle System

Sorry but this I have to disagree, because where I'm from they talk like this. Maybe I don't capture the best way they interact with each other but I've literally been writing for 8 days now.

I disagree with you. Among the new releases this is among the best ones. If you can't understand english language it's your own fault. Besides, you gave 2.5 stars because of this? and after only reading up to chapter 6? this isn't how reviews work.

I'm sorry I wasn't clear. What I meant was - yes, people can talk that way, but you write the conversations with the infodumps in such a way that it justs troublesome to read. Breaking those off in smaller chunks swould probably help. The normal day to day conversations are fine. I've just read a lot of webnnovels/fanfictions, and I agree with the reviewer fleeting cloud that your work seems *******. I'm sure you'll improve as you write more of this, as you've only been writing this for a few days now. I do hope you won't get discouraged because of our negative reviews, because I did write it out as constructive. :D

English is one of my main languages. I'm not very good with it, specially when it come to reviews and creative writing, but I know enough and I've read enough english webnovels/fan fictions to say when a work comes off as *******. I reviewed at chapter 6 because thats where the issues come out, and I did finish the remaining chapters. I'll review it the exact same way. Its only 2.5 stars because I'm a harsh reviewer. If you see any of my other raitings on movies/books/songs, most of it will be 3 stars, even If I like it.