Paschalinelily
I just found this novel today..I like it..as long as FL character having strong character it will be my favorite.My request please don’t drag too long for story, especially ML feeling for FL.I know it will take a time cause he have a lover,but i hope FL will strong enough and stubborn,not feeling underpressure,having achievement,be more elegant and more beautiful.Surely enough to dumb his Ex with her grace.
I took a score away for error and grammar but really feel this has great potential and I eagerly await the next chapters. I do hope it doesn't fall into the trap of being dranged out like a lot of others that I gave up on. Great job with plot so far author. As for the error or grammar that can be fixed and so far it doesn't take too much away from reading the story. I may have been a bit generous with the stars but only because I see a lot of potential for a great story and finish.
I'm reading until Chapter 17. This novel needs an editor for the flow and grammatical errors. I automatically correct the grammar error while reading, and sometimes don't quite get what the author wants to portray. oh, and why the ML mother has to use the husband's surname, got confused while reading.