I took a score away for error and grammar but really feel this has great potential and I eagerly await the next chapters. I do hope it doesn't fall into the trap of being dranged out like a lot of others that I gave up on. Great job with plot so far author. As for the error or grammar that can be fixed and so far it doesn't take too much away from reading the story. I may have been a bit generous with the stars but only because I see a lot of potential for a great story and finish.
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