Reviews of The Great Demon System

There are few grammatical errors, however the writing style just feels so childish... I got to chapter 44... you might be fine with it, who knows.i recommend giving it a try atleast.

This is genuinely one of the worst written things I've ever read. Character personalities change on a dime or are never really fully established so they just warp to fit whatever narrative role the author needs, dialogue reads as if the author has never had a full conversation with another human being and has just pieced together dialogue from D-level movie scripts. The tone of the story is all over the place. I have a friend who's a high school English teacher and I've seen better writing from his students papers. I'm assuming the author is 14-16 years old so I guess it's not shocking that this is so bad but a lot of the problems could have been lessened if he just read more actual books and stole ideas and style from them.

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Will this be continued? Pls this story is too good to be abandoned! Pls drip I need new chapters😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

😁🙂😃 A great read.sadly it's not getting what it deserves because of some similarities it had with my vampire system in the start😔😔.Guys the novel is great and you should at least give it a try 👍👍👍

Top notch mc as well as a good start off for a great novel sometimes I get a bit confused but then again that’s what makes it interesting keep up the good work

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Quite the load of garbage, I know I'm asking for a lot, whether it be common sense, normality. But, here we are with this trash, I'm starting to think all authors and the majority of readers are 10 year olds. Chinese trash sure has made its way around the world.

I suggest don't read it, this is novel with no originality. The MC sucks, and please don't support this kind of novel where they stole other writers work. [img=recommend]

Our MC is totally savage... He is bold ruthless and charismatic, truly lived up his name as demon. .he would never hesitate dealing with betrayal and sucmbags.. I totally like it author, will complete reading all the chapters soon

This novel is one of the best that I have read and apart from the setting being a bit similar to some other novels its plot and character development are quite good.

This suffers from what a lot of beginner novels suffer from, the writing style, plot, and though process, are too immature. Hopefully the Author sticks with writing and grows enough from this to write something great.

It was a pretty interesting novel, but it got too dark for me, to the point where I started to pity the villains and stopped rooting for the protagonist and this makes the novel be no fun since we both know that the MC always wins... Spoiler ahead... (kinda) Not gonna lie I would prefer a redemption arc for Natalie than for that to happen. MC is getting more and more ruthless for no apparent reason and he keeps acting like the ppl he used to hate, ofc he only "attacks" when attacked but still all this torture is very hard to stomach...

As of the writing of this review there are only 42 chapters released so far and I have read them all. The writing quality is not bad at all. I have only seen two very minor typos and maybe just a few grammatical ones, but then a again I am not an English teacher or very knowledgeable about my own native language to find something as small as those mistakes. I have not had this novel in my library long enough to see how good the stability of updates are. The story development is fast paced and the mc does gain power quickly but not fast enough to ruin the story. I especially like the romance aspect in the latter chapters. This genre has a bad reputation for romance that is not always good or well developed but I see a lot of potential. I also like the path the story has taken along with just about every other path also. Thinking about I was first worried about that part of the story but the only for the author to have made it possible was to do what the author did. Character design is not exactly perfect but it is good and will get the job done in a fine way. World background is good not to excessive and not lacking important details that a reader may inquire about during their read. This novel does have a very similar setting to the my vampire system novel which I have read up to chapter 150 of. This author takes this novel in a much better direction, gives the reader a greater since of maturity, and just seems like the author knows what they are doing. It has been my sincere pleasure to read this and I look forward to more. To who ever is reading this please do take care of yourself during these trying times.

First I want to say this is amazing. At the beginning, it seems like the Vamp system novel but trusts me it isn't. I love the book because it is much darker than most other books or novels that are really just trying to be dark. other books have too much inner personality conflict between them trying to be good and kind while also being a monster/demon/vampire/etc. the MC quickly excerpts what he is and does not try to change it. there is little to no internal conflict which I find refreshing. I hope everyone gives this book a try and not drop it thinking it's like Vamp system because it is NOT. Thanks author. Keep up the great work.

i love the setting of the novel, especially the naming of the skills, that is a very creative thing to do, author more grease to your elbow. please keep it up, so that the novel can keep us company🤜🤛👐👐🖐️🖐️😘😘😘👋👋

A copy of the "vampire system", but the problem is that the author pushes the story too hard, creates difficulties for the character that are resolved with a skill he learned when no one was watching (this happened when Jayden breaks into Abby's mansion). Force the feeling to try to create a drama (this happens when Alex sacrifices himself to save Abby for supposedly loving her, when the 2 didn't live together for 30 minutes). In general, it's a novel that you can read but you'll end up losing the will to read because of these slashes.

Finally a rated 18 chapter : the chapter 108 "Moby Dick" with a protagonist called Moby is a good proof [img=recommend] I recommend this original novel to all the fans of stories with supernatural, demons, protagonist with somone ekse insude their head : the characters are really good, the story is awesome and the background is really interesting. Don't miss this gem

I’ve only read to 15 chapters so far; however I’m already intrigued by the plot. The main character could be called cruel or merciless, but he lives in a dark world himself. It’s no wonder he’s twisted. The MC seems realistic and is efficient and decisive in his decision making, an aspect which I love in a character. And while the world background may be a bit vague, I don’t mind much because the flowing dialogue attracts your attention instead of the missing details. In summary, definitely saved in my library... I’m looking forward to reading the later chapters, so keep up the good work author ! (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭ꠥ⁾⁾

Hmmm making another review after seeing the other ones. For the ones who think it's too similar to the Vampire System clearly havent read past chapter 5, This is the authors first novel so give the novel a try it's really good. Although it does have its similarities to vampire system such as the military and bullied kid plus the system (lol) the novels take a completely different turn after the first five chapters so give this novel a read. one of the ones that I actually enjoy on here