Review Detail of Sean_Hibbitt in The Great Demon System

Item: The Great Demon System
Rating: 2.4

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Sean_HibbittLv143yrSean_Hibbitt

There are few grammatical errors, however the writing style just feels so childish... I got to chapter 44... you might be fine with it, who knows.i recommend giving it a try atleast.

The Great Demon System

Drip

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DripAuthorDrip

The style was childish because I was a child when writing it 🤣. My current style in my most recent chapters is much better. I don't expect you to read that far which is fine. Thanks for the review! 😄

3yr

Sean_HibbittLv14Sean_Hibbitt

ah xD what chapter does it start getting better and I'll happily give it another go?

Drip:The style was childish because I was a child when writing it 🤣. My current style in my most recent chapters is much better. I don't expect you to read that far which is fine. Thanks for the review! 😄

3yr

DripAuthorDrip

I would say around 120, I stop adding a million "!!!" and "hahshahah" every 2 seconds 🤣

Sean_Hibbitt:ah xD what chapter does it start getting better and I'll happily give it another go?

3yr

Sean_HibbittLv14Sean_Hibbitt

sweet xD

3yr