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Reviews of The God Of Fire In Naruto [Paused]

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The God Of Fire In Naruto [Paused]

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Adict
AdictLv5Adict

It's great. The mc actually have development which is crazy, you don't find this very often here, his powers are cool and even if he is op there's situations when it's not that clear so is not boring cause you know he'll always win without any cost. The writing is very good and you can feel like the characters are people not mannequins, and they have personallity which means they take decisions based on that personality which means they make mistakes which means no gary stu or mary sue. The story of a guy that makes a deal with a sword, in exchange of power for revenge he'll have to build a place for the souls to live after death.

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DogeLuvReadin
DogeLuvReadinLv13DogeLuvReadin

Its actually pretty good, i cant wait for more! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

SAGE
SAGELv2SAGE

At first I liked the idea of building a souls society, but I don't like the idea of him being considerate of others even though he's a Shinigami

Valkry
ValkryLv5Valkry

The potential here is too high to be true. Keep it up πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

DrippiestDripper
DrippiestDripperLv1DrippiestDripper

Ryujin Jakka, The Greatest Zanpakuto of all time. I wish you would have made it a three year time skip but it's all right. Nice Story Mate! [img=recommend]

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14DetachedDreamer

original idea, original character, focus on progression, action, and growth. romance not a main point. so far pretty perfect compared to most work I've read on here. keep it up!

vcut
vcutLv4vcut

very well done I hope to see more of this also the update is good but just change the name lance okay TFJVHUANNKJJABUHJAUGHFGHJHCVBHGYSGG SEHHHHEHEHEHHEBEHEHEHEHHH

kiddeath1998
kiddeath1998Lv14kiddeath1998

this sword has the potential to be RyΕ«jin Jakka so 5 star for now.............................................................................

Jhonathan_Carrasco
Jhonathan_CarrascoLv4Jhonathan_Carrasco

my favorite element is of course fire and since I read the title of the story,I was excited to read everything and to my not surprise face,I loved the bleach and naruto coming together with a goal to reach for the mc,so please keep it up I love this story please.

DaoOfPeeking
DaoOfPeekingLv13DaoOfPeeking

When I read the synopsis Saying they're good using at Swords my hand just automatically press the "Add to Library" damn HAHAHAHA πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Ciara_Quinn_Bravo
Ciara_Quinn_BravoLv4Ciara_Quinn_Bravo

Great story to read I love it. Also I get the feeling someone possibly does not like sasuke. But that's just my impression so who is to say really.

ghost_kuro
ghost_kuroLv1ghost_kuro

if the MC is a transmigrator the story would have been better. its like giving a Nuclear missile to a chiwawa who does not know what to do with it nor knowing anything about the plot of the naruto verse? is it really enjoyable reading about the MC that keep questioning things(acting dumb) when we the readers already have the answers to? sigh...i am not even curious about the capabilities Ryujin jakka and I even know the plot of naruto verse. When I see the naive MC being oblivious to all this without anything new to add its kind of annoying and boring.Not to mention when the MC jumps to conclusion sigh. for example all these could happen : seeing black zetsu "who are you? I will join you to bring my parents back"............. seeing Obito, "I believe you because you are madara"................... seeing Danzo "I will put my life on the line to protect you benefactor"... seeing Hinata "I realize that I love you" ..instant rip to boruto seeing Ino "I realize that I love you" ..instant rip to inojin seeing Jiraya/tsunade "sorry I have to kill you because you are friends with the snake"... conclusion: A NAIVE DUMB MC WITH A FAKE RYUJIN JAKKA WHO IS A PHEONIX INSTEAD OF A DRAGON. Writing Quality-4 STAR.................................good Story Development-2 STAR.........................not interesting Character Design - 1 STAR.........................irritating World Background-4 STAR.........................got narutoverse vibe

reqrwq2
reqrwq2Lv3reqrwq2

His clan was massacred, his parents were killed infront him. But he is worried about some cheap bandits life who tried to kill him. Why is searching for Orochimaru. To tell him killing is bad and do not kill people in the future? then you can be my best friends. See how awesome hero I am. I can become friends with the murderer of my parents .

MalKenDov
MalKenDovLv5MalKenDov

haven't read it yet but it looks good. also is that picture from that manga drifters. reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo, reo

Maksim_Mitin
Maksim_MitinLv3Maksim_Mitin

Он Ρ…ΠΎΡ‡Π΅Ρ‚ ΠΎΡ‚ΠΎΠΌΡΡ‚ΠΈΡ‚ΡŒ ,Π½ΠΎ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ Ρ‚ΠΎΠ»ΡŒΠΊΠΎ ΠΏΠΎΠ»ΡƒΡ‡ΠΈΠ» Π½Π΅ΠΌΠ½ΠΎΠ³ΠΎ силы сразу ΠΆΠ΅ ΠΏΠΎΠ±Π΅ΠΆΠ°Π» Π·Π° ΠžΡ€ΠΎΡ‡ΠΈ , Π½Π΅Ρ‚ Π±Ρ‹ ΠΏΠ°Ρ€Ρƒ Π»Π΅Ρ‚ ΠΏΠΎΡ‚Ρ€Π΅Π½ΠΈΡ€ΠΎΠ²Π°Ρ‚ΡŒΡΡ Π½ΠΎ Π·Π°Ρ‡Π΅ΠΌ..................................

Fidae
FidaeLv5Fidae

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Humbles_34
Humbles_34Lv13Humbles_34

please come back one day I remember reading this story and it's always in the back of my mind.

hero4hire
hero4hireLv11hero4hire

Is everyone named Rei? the first chapter itself is too confusing, why would author set up mc rei to be killed by enemy ninja rei when he could've choosen any names since none of them were important named chracter.

zahra_kianpour
zahra_kianpourLv3zahra_kianpour

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AsuraBor
AsuraBorLv2AsuraBor

I love this so much and would love to see it continued but either way i had so much fun reading this.