Shynobi
I absolutly love this concept of bringing a steam punk styled outfit and weapons into a fantasy setting. Even though it seemed like the mc was just to good at so many things and always had a vast amount of knowledge stores from his previous world. Overall, this is a great read with lots of detail into its story and its characters.
I am going cons then Pros. The mc backstory is inconsistent with his actions. The author seems undecided on his intelligence and forces some plots making it a bit weird. Despite the weird inconsistencies, the premise is still okay, and does a good job for newer viewers of the genre . So will recommend, but advise to skip and read and forget some of bs in story and continue retending it never happened
Hi Shynobi, greeting from editor Hannah! After reading the first chapter I would like to say I personally like this story, it's not shallow at all but being amusing all the time.I laughed a lot but you got to forgive me. I do like the reversal of MC's romance from the very beginning and I don't agree to the comments saying you suck at it lol. It's cool and I really being curious about what's going on for the next step. But before my further reading, I have to point out that I send this message to ask whether you are willing to take the offer of getting your work with more search visibility that let more readers be able to get into your story! We will PAY for this and the benefits should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:rhz.ringdom@gamil.com , or leave me any contact method you like to use for communication. I am glad to discuss it with you in details.
The story is good, but the characters lack a little, I mean the main character, even if he left the shadow to be a researcher, he will have limits that no one threatens him or tries to kill him and survive not to mention the issue of his pride as a secret agent who is a killer mainly and then a genius researcher comes and some of the case arrogance comes to him I think that the limits of his personality must It changes because in a world that does not have the mercy of its enemies, and this is my own view, far from that. I think it is a good narration, worth reading, and please complete it.👍✨
OVERALL I HAVE NO ISSUES. Haters will always be there. While reading I really appreciated the Love development is not super fast but has a reason. Just to let some readers know that if MC does not have some advantage then the novel will not go in the intended direction. Readers should know and keep in mind that it is fictional and there will be things done according to author. Not every person can be satisfied as people have diffrent genre preferences.
This novel is good, but not perfect, maybe because the author is busy irl, so only the update stability is not perfect. Overall i really love this story development, especially after the re-write.. , cant wait for the R-18 with his girls, and i expect the mc will be more aggresive in the future, so his enemy will not look down on him, because they think he is a mortal..