Reviews of The First World Emperor

Hi, this is Sovora here, nice to meet you! I just want to thank everyone who has taken the time to read this novel! I hope that you will enjoy this novel as I do my best making this story feel alive and interesting! And special thanks to the people who have commented on the novel! It really gives me the needed motivation to try and improve my writing! So thank you very much for reading this and I hope to see you in the future!

Well overall i like your work, and hope you to keep it up. I wish you could bring anyone that see your work to your world...................... 140 character

4.5 star, great storyline but you need more impact and add in feelings for the mc, when he got up from the floor, how does he feel, what was the result on sleeping on the floor? The space of which he sleep at is it cramped or spacious for him to stretch?

This story is well written and enjoyable. Although not much is known yet about the world. It gives a Roman vibe with gladiators etc. I'm looking forward to how the story proceeds! Keep up the good work

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its a great book to read.. i recommend to be read by all age.cant wait to see the becoming an emperor at a young age.. nice story overall.. and its a veryy looong review right now so i have to read the rest of the story now.. can i?

The mc is interesting and is learning a long with the readers. The action in this novel is its bread and butter and is done well and is easy to picture what is happening in the fight. Look forward to the war and more releases and the development of the mc and side characters.

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Just a pet peeve of mine but damn are the paragraphs ridiculously chunky. It just hurts my eyes when I try to read through what is an otherwise alright story.

So far so good even i just started reading it from previews accounts keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

brilliant loving it just hope you can make chapter abit faster im really an impatient person cant wait until they get to the battle, i hope you can make it a really intense one

I don't like when novels doesn't have any "profoundness". Everything is too easy, everything is too fast and the mc got a huge plot armor... His personality is crap and undeveloped. If you are a retarded teenager or if you want just to wast your time then go for it... because the writing quality is not bad and the stability of updates is quiet good...