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The Psyducks were paid actors
During the whole sequence Mark should have had his hand-held mirror with him the entire time so "taking out the hand-held mirror" is a bit misleading since it's right in his hand. Should I just edit such issues out of the chapter? Or just leave it here and leave a comment like this pointing it out?
It should have been in his hand throughout the sequence. Ah, I just realized I left "taking out the hand-held mirror" instead of "He looked down on the cracked mirror" in a paragraph before this one. Whoops.
It was supposed to have fallen out of Mark's pocket after the shockwave. But in hindsight, I probably should have cut this part out or at least added more to it.
Didn't realize updating the paragraph would remove comments. @funmaxwell thanks for pointing it out about the vegan thing, completely flew past me while I was writing this part.
Yeah completely flew past me while writing that part, thanks for pointing it out!