Reviews of The First Store System
The First Store System
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I read about 300 chapters before dropping. It's hard to give this a bad review and find faults. It's also hard to give it a positive review. The author has imagined a very thought out world. The detail and description and history and races has been considered and perfected to a very fine point. The authors writing style and quality is fine, and while the side characters are not perfectly fleshed out they are also not generic. The problems only really show because the story development is all over the place and it feels like the author doesn't really know where he wants to take the story. In 300 chapters there is very little to no development or room for improvement. The MC never faces challenges or has any pressure to grow or change. The Author can't seem to decide if he wants a system story or a virtual video game world story. And somehow in both worlds the MC is an omnipotent god. Overall this novel is good to have something on the back burner while you're waiting for other stories with a more fulfilling plot. But if you're looking for something that gets the heart beating and as satisfying and complete arcs go elsewhere.
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The character design and world background are 5 stars for me. I got bored reading somewhere in chapter 530+ but I still read it until chapter 666. Too much training info; if there's no major event happening there's always training chaps for 2-5 out of ten chapters for 1 weapon that I decided to stop reading. even tho it's already chapter 600's there still chapters only about his training.
This book is well written, interesting content, but I find the main character to be too apathetic and the attitude towards death and killing is very casual. Killing an entire race of people because of an organization led by members of their race seems to be a bit overboard… (just one example). The mc has a level of apathy that doesn’t lend itself well to adding other characters to the story, and leads to a somewhat 2 dimensional and bland character. It feels impersonal, somewhat depressing, and unlike many other stories there is nothing about the mc that makes me want him to succeed.
I enjoy the idea and the world building love the deva and creation stuff, personally I am dropping it, not on the authtor just isn’ my cup of tea. Maybe I should have read more but didn’t like the main character’s personality. Lily, can be annoying, but I like the realistic dependence/ coampaionship they have together, for most of their really long existence they have only had each other. The MC spoil Lily, because of course he would view others as the same level of being as her, like your family versus a stranger. I honestly wish we got more of the beginning stuff, the different lives and accomplishments of customers.
this book is a fine piece of art among other books within this category and difference so very clear so I highly recommend this to you if you interested in this type of book among the many the introduction (first 10nchapters) I was partially lost has to what was going on until author gave some more detailed flashback so I will encourage others readers to be strong and read past those chapters so you can see where the real plot begins. I know some readers don't enjoy flashbacks that much(I don't like heavy flashbacks but I think this is okay) but apart from that everything is decent from characters to world building and side characters( which I would congratulate the author for cutting out the bland side characters I used to know and bring some variety) all in all solid 10/10 highly recommended
Only read till chapter 44, The girl Maria will be taken as a worker in the fututre? Cause that girl want to really hold closer to MC. Also most of the problem can be resolved by at least showing equal strength to the KING since he can manipulate what the other can see.While I understand Maria and maybe some people will be biased because shes' a woman. The first store said it's a safe place but she was harassed inside. Just verbally abusing her means he disregard your store. You don't need the usual face slapping cause the guy is literally God in that place.If you want peace then always be ready for war. Also it's kind of hard to develop feelings for the story or character since there are nothing to like so far even the MC cat or humor. Still, I can see the allure of this novel.
The world is very well written, although some characters can get a little annoying it's still really good. some things are still shrouded in a little bit of mystery. Overall it's a good novel and very likely an English somewhat translated and semi inspired version of the novel 神级店长(god level store manager), that novel is only in Chinese for now, so you would enjoy reading this one more i guess. Author did you read that novel? god level store manager?